题目内容
6.假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅行,但你因故不能赴约.请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:1 表示歉意 2 解释原因 3 另约时间.Dear Tom,
I'm sorry,for I won't be able to
go to Beijing with you next weekend,which I have promised.【高分句型】I feel sorry for it and want you to know what happened.(表示歉意)
Just now,my cousin,Li Qing,who left home to Australia for his further study last year,informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family.【高分句型】You know,we haven't seen each other for nearly a year.(解释原因)
I sincerely hope you can accept my appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing.Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.(另约时间)Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua.
分析 本题是书信类作文,要求写一封电子邮件,因为不能赴约向杰克表示歉意;解释原因;还有另约时间.材料已给出,写作的时候关键在于要点要全面包括,不能有遗漏和省略.还要有适当的拓展,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采.审题时注意本文使用一般过去时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出.难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述.
【亮点说明】I'm sorry,for I won't be able to go to Beijing with you next weekend,which I have promised.这句话用了非限制性定语从句,I feel sorry about it and want you to know what has happened.这句话用了宾语从句,Just now,my cousin,Li Qiong,who left home to Australia for his further study last year,informed me that he will return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family.这句话用了定语从句和宾语从句,I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Shanghai.这句话用了动名词的复合结构.Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.这句话用了过去分词做定语.
解答 Dear Tom
I'm sorry,for I won't be able to go to Beijing with you next weekend,which I have promised.【高分句型】I feel sorry for it and want you to know what happened.(表示歉意)
Just now,my cousin,Li Qing,who left home to Australia for his further study last year,informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family.【高分句型】You know,we haven't seen each other for nearly a year.(解释原因)
I sincerely hope you can accept my appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing.Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.(另约时间)
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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12.After he drank some wine,Tom wasslightly(稍微地)
13.It is notconvenient(方便的) for me to come now,I am busy.
14.Television has many advantages.Foe example,it canprovide(提供) us with entertainment at home.
15.Communication(沟通) with other countries was difficult in ancient times.
16.Usually,women are gentle and not asaggressive(挑衅的) as men.
17.Oil is Kuwait's most important naturalresource(资源)
18.I wish everyone wouldrespect(尊敬)each other
19.Department storesdisplay(展示) their goods in the windows.
20.More than 30 software firms wereinvolved(参与) in the project.
A. | held up | B. | sent up | C. | set up | D. | set out |