题目内容
5.你叫李华,作为一个即将毕业的高三学生,不久就要离开父母,去求学或工作,回想十几年间和父母相处的点点滴滴,平时很少帮父母做家务,有时甚至很任性或和父母争吵,请你给父母写一封信,表达自己的感恩之情.注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.文章中严禁出现所在城市名称及个人真实姓名.
Dear father and mother,
Yours
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇开放式作文,写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.
亮点句型一:Thinking of leaving you soon,I begin to think more about the past years.想到离开你很快,我开始想更多关于过去的岁月.本句用现在分词thinking在句中做状语.
亮点句型二:No matter how old I am,it's a priority to respect you-my father and mother.无论我多大年纪,我都要尊敬我的父亲和母亲.这是一个有状语从句的句子,no matter how old I am在句中做让步状语.
解答 Dear father and mother,
As time going on,it will be two months before I leave for college.
Thinking of leaving you soon,I begin to think more about the past years.(亮点句型一)Although both of you are occupied with a great deal of work,you always prepare three meals for me,do a lot of cleaning in the house,and pay much attention to my study as well.However,as your son (or daughter),I can often find an excuse to escape from doing housework,even when I can get what I want or disagree with you,I talk back and quarrel with you frequently.As a matter of fact,now,I have realized that it's you who give me life.without you,I can not live in this world.Today,I really want to express my gratitude to you.Respecting parents is our traditional virtue in China.No matter how old I am,it's a priority to respect you-my father and mother.(亮点句型二)
Best wished for you!
yours
LiHua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
Take one of my patients Kate,who often spoke of her shoe addiction,as an example.She said she had many more shoes than she could use or afford,and she found it nearly impossible to pass up a pair that caught her eye.When she was stressed out,she bought shoes.When she felt sad,she bought shoes.If Kate forced herself not to buy shoes for a week or two,she didn't get physically ill.But she was rarely able to resist shoe shopping for much longer than that.
Many different causes are behind the phenomena.First of all,we think there is a genetic component,since compulsive behaviors seem to happen again in families.An imbalance of chemicals in the brain called neurotransmitters (神经介质) may also be to blame.In addition,compulsions often go hand in hand with anxiety and depression.
How do you know when it has crossed the line?Ask yourself these questions:Are you busy planning and doing the behavior?For example,are you having trouble concentrating on work because you're spending time shopping online?Is the behavior negatively affecting one or more areas of your life?Have you tried your best to stop the behavior but couldn't?If your answers are"yes",you may be struggling with a compulsive behavior and need some help.
When you find yourself having a compulsive behavior,you should start by admitting that you have a problem and thinking about what is driving the behavior.And then try to interrupt or at least postpone the behavior.Changing the way you do it is also a good idea.For example,if you can't stop eating sweets every day,try having an apple every time you want that candy bar.Finally,if you feel you need more help,consider seeing a therapist (治疗专家),who will give you tools to change the actual behavior.
Addictions or compulsions? | |
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(71)Differencesbetween additions and compulsions | ●When you are addicted to something,you (72)dependon it psychologically and physically,and you'll get physically ill when you give it up. ●A compulsion is a strong desire to do something,and you have (73)difficultycontrolling it. |
Kate's case | ●She was so fond of buying shoes that she always bought those shoes that (74)attracther,especially when she felt stressed or sad. ●However,if she forced herself to resist shoe shopping,she wouldn't get ill physically. |
(75)Reasonsof compulsions | ●A compulsion can be genetic or environmental. ●A person can suffer from compulsions when his brain lose (76)balanceof chemicals. |
Signs of compulsions | ●You're so busy doing the behavior that you fail to (77)concentrateon your work. ●You're experiencing the negative (78)effectof the behavior on your life. ●You can't stop the behavior. |
Treatments for compulsions | ●Admit your problem and try to know the roots of the behavior. ●Try to (79)interruptor at least postpone the behavior. ●Change the way you do the behavior. ●(80)Turningto a therapist for more help. |