Question

14．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．你的英国朋友Jim 想了解中国人起名字的习惯，并请你帮他起一个中文名字．请给他写封信，内容包括：
1．介绍中国人起名字的习惯；
2．给他起一个中文名字；
3．说明起此名字的理由．
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
I am glad to tell you something about the Chinese naming practice．
Unlike your tradition，the family name in China is put first，followed by the given name．（高分句型一）The given name usually contains one or two Chinese characters．Chinese people often name a baby with their best wishes in mind，like wishes for good health，bright future and happiness．Some names imply the birth time，birth place，weather or even a natural phenomenon at the time of the baby's birth．（高分句型二）In terms of choosing the characters，parents still need to consider how they sound when combined into a name．They definitely wouldn't want their child to be teased or given a bad nickname because of the pronunciation．（高分句型三）
As for your Chinese name，how about"吉祥（Ji Xiang）"？The first character has a similar pronunciation to your name Jim，and both of the characters mean"good luck"．You can imagine it：whenever someone calls you"Ji Xiang"，it's like he or she is wishing you good luck．（高分句型四）I hope you'll love this Chinese name．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．你的英国朋友Jim 想了解中国人起名字的习惯，并请你帮他起一个中文名字．请给他写封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：介绍中国人起名字的习惯；给他起一个中文名字；说明起此名字的理由． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Unlike 不像…一样；at the time of在…的时候；In terms of关于；because of由于；As for至于；
Unlike your tradition，the family name in China is put first，followed by the given name．（高分句型一）
Some names imply the birth time，birth place，weather or even a natural phenomenon at the time of the baby's birth．（高分句型二）
They definitely wouldn't want their child to be teased or given a bad nickname because of the pronunciation．（高分句型三）
You can imagine it：whenever someone calls you"Ji Xiang"，it's like he or she is wishing you good luck．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Jim，
       I am glad to tell you something about the Chinese naming practice．
       Unlike your tradition，the family name in China is put first，followed by the given name．（高分句型一）The given name usually contains one or two Chinese characters．Chinese people often name a baby with their best wishes in mind，like wishes for good health，bright future and happiness．Some names imply the birth time，birth place，weather or even a natural phenomenon at the time of the baby's birth．（高分句型二）In terms of choosing the characters，parents still need to consider how they sound when combined into a name．They definitely wouldn't want their child to be teased or given a bad nickname because of the pronunciation．（高分句型三）
       As for your Chinese name，how about"吉祥（Ji Xiang）"？The first character has a similar pronunciation to your name Jim，and both of the characters mean"good luck"．You can imagine it：whenever someone calls you"Ji Xiang"，it's like he or she is wishing you good luck．（高分句型四）I hope you'll love this Chinese name．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．