题目内容
1.假如你是高三学生李华,毕业后想去康奈尔大学(Cornell University)深造.请结合以下要点给康奈尔大学的负责人写一封电子邮件,希望获得奖学金.1.自我介绍,包括英语水平、独立生活的能力以及与人沟通的能力;
2.希望获得奖学金;
3.希望得到答复.
注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua.
I'm writing in the hope of obtaining a scholarship in Cornell University for the bachelor's degree.
As a straightAstudent,I have a good command of both science and arts,especially English.I've passed TOEFL with an excellent score.Apart from my outstanding academic achievements,I take part in various after-class activities to improve my social skills and broaden my horizons,thus preparing me for an independent life.Furthermore,child as I am,I'm willing to help others.All in all,I believe I have the appropriate qualifications and experience for my further study.
Thanks for your time and consideration.I'd appreciate it if my application could be approved of.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
Apart from my outstanding academic achievements,I take part in various after-class activities to improve my social skills and broaden my horizons,thus preparing me for an independent life
除了我的杰出的学术成就,我参加各种课外活动来提高自己的社交能力,开阔了我的视野,因此我准备独立生活.
高分句型二:
All in all,I believe I have the appropriate qualifications and experience for my further study.
无论如何,我相信我已经有进一步研究的资格和经验.
解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua.I'm writing in the hope of obtaining a scholarship in Cornell University for the bachelor's degree.
As a straight A student,I have a good command of both science and arts,especially English.I've passed TOEFL with an excellent score.Apart from my outstanding academic achievements,I take part in various after-class activities to improve my social skills and broaden my horizons,thus preparing me for an independent life(高分句型一).Furthermore,child as I am,I'm willing to help others.All in all,I believe I have the appropriate qualifications and experience for my further study(高分句型二).
Thanks for your time and consideration.I'd appreciate it if my application could be approved of.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
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