Question

10．假如你是李华．校英文报Growing pains栏目专门解答中学生的烦恼问题．现栏目收到一封来信．请根据这封信的内容写一封回信．
Dear Editor，
I am really angry with my parents recently．Next Sunday is my birthday．My parents promised to buy a cell phone for me as my birthday present this year．But now when I ask about the birthday present they say they have changed their ideas，because they worry about my study if I get a new cell phone since the final exam is coming soon．They say a cell phone may take up too much of my time．I believe I am old enough to control myself，but they don't believe me．What's more，they broke their promise!
Li Yan
内容要求：
1．理解父母良苦用心；
2．手机有利有弊；
3．给出你的建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已写好．
Dear Li Yan，
It's normal to have these feelings．
As a saying says，to be appreciated as a parents is quite unusual．It is quit sure that parents are willing to do theirbest to give us as possible as they can．We should understandthe good intentions of parents．They must have been for your own good．As a high school student，our studies are important and very heavy．There are many advantages of mobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checkinginformation and so on．But there is also a lot of harm，such as improper use，indeed affect the study and life．We should try our best to study and make great progress．
I hope things will be better for you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
It is quit sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can
很肯定，家长们都愿意尽自己最大的努力给我们尽可能好的东西．
高分句型二：
There are many advantages of mobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checking information and so on．
手机有很多优点如检字典，听音乐，查资料等等．

解答 Dear Li Yan，
   It's normal to have these feelings．As a saying says，to be appreciated as a parents is quite unusual．It is quit sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can（高分句型一）．We should understand the good intentions of parents．They must have been for your own good．As a high school student，our studies are important and very heavy．There are many advantages of mobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checking information and so on（高分句型二）．But there is also a lot of harm，such as improper use，indeed affect the study and life．We should try our best to study and make great progress．
I hope things will be better for you soon!
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．