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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently, we have had a instructive discussion on how to make English learning relaxing and interesting. It’s all too natural that we had come up with a lot of advices concerning the topic. Firstly, we can have more interactive activities that makes English learning great fun in class and it is generally considered not a little beneficially to us all. Secondly, we need to find more chances to communicating with people in English, whether they are English teachers and classmates, because using English is the best way to learn. As it is known to all, practice makes perfect.

In my eyes, there are many other ways like listening English songs, watching English movies, joining English clubs or making pen friends on the Internet. That we need most is more time and more space.

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【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述作者就如何就英语学习变得轻松有趣进行了讨论。

第一处:考查冠词。形容词instructive是以元音音素开头,故用不定冠词an。句意:最近,我们就如何使英语学习轻松有趣进行了有益的讨论。故将a改为an

第二处:考查虚拟语气。It’s natural that从句中,从句用should + v原形,should可以省略。句意:关于这个话题,我们提出了很多建议,这是很自然的。故将had改为have

第三处:考查名词。名词advice为不可数名词,故不用复数形式。句意:关于这个话题,我们提出了很多建议,这是很自然的。故将advices改为advice

第四处:考查主谓一致。定语从句中先行词为复数名词activities,故定语从句中谓语动词用复数形式。句意:首先,我们可以有更多的互动活动,使英语学习在课堂上很有趣。故将makes改为make

第五处:考查形容词。not a little后接形容词形式。句意:它通常被认为是对我们所有人都有好处。故将beneficially改为beneficial

第六处: 考查动词。这里为不定式to,故后接动词原形。句意:我们需要找到更多的机会用英语与人交流。故将communicate改为communicating

第七处:考查固定用法。whether … or ………还是……。句意:我们需要找到更多的机会用英语与人交流,无论是英语老师还是同学。故将and改为or

第八处:考查固定用法。As is known to all众所周知。句意:众所周知,熟能生巧。故将it去掉。

第九处:考查动词用法。动词listen为不及物动词,接物后加介词to。句意:比如听英语歌曲,看英语电影。故在listen后加to

第十处:考查名词性从句。主语从句中缺少宾语,故用what引导。句意:我们最需要的是更多的时间和空间。故将That改为What

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【题目】Directions: Fill in each blank with a proper word chosen from the box. Each word can be used only once. Note that there is one word more than you need.

Put down the phone and live in the moment

Have you ever unintentionally left your phone at home and wondered how you would get through the day? Baylor College of Medicine’s Dr. Jin Han explains why this might be a sign that you need to put down your phone more often.

“There has been a(n) 1 in technology as our phones have gone from just regular cell phones to smart phones that allow you to multitask all with one device,” said Han, assistant professor at Baylor. “You use your phone now to receive emails, to text and chat and to access social media platforms -- 2 your phone may be your connection to your social life.”

Although they offer many advantages, Han cautions that using your smart devices can be harmful if you use them too much. For example, using your smart phone while driving, or even walking, can cause serious accidents. Also, staring at your screen for too long can be harmful to your 3.

Being 4 too long to your phone also can impact the quality of your relationships, he said. If you are on your phone constantly and not 5 with those around you, it can take away from your relationships with your family and friends. In addition, if you are using your phone too much in front your children, then they will likely follow your lead and use their own smart devices rather than 6 with you.

“ In the end, the question is how you balance using your phone while not negatively 7 your health.” Han said. “Anything that you are doing to the 8 is no healthy anymore. While it is going to be almost impossible not to use this technology, we have t create a behavior that is healthy.”

To help 9 the time you spend on your phone, Han offered the following tips:

Limit the time spent on your phone: Set up certain time that you allow yourself to be on the phone.

Do not use your phone at night: Being on your phone late into the night can make it harder for you to fall asleep and wake up the next day. Restricting your phone use at night can help you 10 a healthy sleep behavior.

【题目】“Please put your phone down Daddy, we haven’t finished the story!” Hearing these heartfelt words from my four-year-old daughter was an uncomfortable wake-up call. How had I let the shiny electronic box in my hand take so much of my attention that it could even interrupt a short bedtime story with my precious children?

It’s no exaggeration to suggest that our mobile devices are in danger of taking over our entire lives. Time magazine found that 68% of users take their devices to bed with them, 20% check their phones every ten minutes and one third report feeling anxious when briefly separated from their beloved gadget. According to Osterman research, 79% of respondents take their work-related device on vacation and 33% admit to hiding from family and friends in order to check Facebook and Twitter. It’s hard to deny that these are worrying trends.

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1.用大约30字概括上文和图表的主要内容;

2.结合上述信息,用大约120字论述:

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(2)你认为在生活中应当如何处理人和科技的关系。

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1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.不必写标题。

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