Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，你校与美国一所友好学校决定通过网络开展跨文化交流活动（Cross -cultural Communication Project）。请你用邮件与美方联系，谈谈自己对交流活动内容的设想，征求对方意见。

你建议交流活动应包括以下四个方面内容：

1. 自我介绍；

2. 饮食文化差异；

3. 中学教育；

4. 语言学习体会。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Hi Mark,

Hope all is well.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Mark,

Hope all is well. I’d like to take this opportunity to share my plan with you on our Cross Cultural Communication Project.

To be practical, we can have four aspects in our communication. First, a brief self-introduction is needed. Then, as students in both sides are interested in foreign students’ life, food culture sharing will surely be the most popular. In addition, each one is expected to describe the education that they are having in their own countries. Last but not least, exchange of skills for language study may be of great value to both sides.

That’s all. I’m open to your suggestions and expecting your plan. Only with joined efforts can the project be a great success.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于书信作文，根据提示信息来介绍跨文化交流的设想。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Only with joined efforts can the project be a great success.为部分倒装结构。此外，文章还使用了大量短语To be practical, be of great value等短语。副词Last but not least的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。