Question

【题目】假如你是光明中学的高三学生李华，从互联网上得知Disney’s California Adventure Park 要在暑期面向全球招聘志愿者，欢迎各国学生参加。请根据以下招聘信息写一封电子邮件申请参加。

注意：1. 词数：100词左右，邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Looking forward to your reply.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m LiHua. I’ve learned from the Internet that you want some volunteers from all over the world. I’m interested in the position, so Im writing to apply for it.

As for me, I speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with native English speakers. Besides, I love doing sports during my spare time. In addition, I`m an honest, optimistic and helpful girl.

I`ll graduate from high school on July 8 and available from July 14 to August 14. I`m sure I have the ability to satisfy you. I`d really appreciate it if you`d like to consider my request.

Looking forward to your reply.

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据要求写一篇书信要求：1. 词数：100词左右，邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。需要根据要求写，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇，并添加关联词让行文流畅。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达使用书信的格式，开门见山，运用平常的词语却写的新颖，别致，内容丰富。写出了作者的主要目的，清晰干净，让人产生联想，简单易懂，感情真挚，虽然不华丽，却很朴实。没有过多的空话。文章运用了一般现在时和将来时穿插。用了很多语法知识，运用了第一人陈为主的叙述顺序。