Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是高二学生李华。你的英国笔友Mike 来信说他准备戒烟。请你根据以下内容提示给他回信：

1. 给予肯定和鼓励；

2. 推荐可行的戒烟方法；

3. 表达你的祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数100-120；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

I was delighted to hear from you, knowing that you have decided to stop smoking. As you’re always a strong-minded guy, I’m sure you can manage it once you make up your mind. I’m sending you some advice that might help.

First of all, prepare yourself. Throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all the benefits you will get from stopping smoking. Secondly, be determined. Every time you feel like smoking a cigarette, remind yourself that you are a non-smoker. Thirdly, get help if necessary. Joining a stop-smoking group and talking to friends or doctors are good ideas. Whatever happens, just believe that you will succeed eventually.

I’m looking forward to your good news.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be delighted to高兴；make up one’s mind下定决心；First of all首先；make a list列清单；be looking forward to期待；