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【题目】假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Peter让你写信给他介绍中国的传统节日“中秋节”,内容包括:
1.时间;
2.方式;
3.意义。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:阴历lunar calendar; 象征 symbol; 团圆 reunion
Dear Peter,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
The Mid-autumn Festival is a traditional festival with a long history in China. It is very popular and is also celebrated in many other Asian countries.
The festival falls on the 15th day of August of the lunar calendar. It is a time to get together with family and friends. People usually gather together enjoying a big meal. In the evening people talk and eat moon cakes under the bright and round moon. Children prefer to listen to fairy tales about Chang’e or Wugang.
The moon is a symbol of reunion, luck and wealth. It is also a custom to express best wishes to people they love at this particular time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Peter让你写信给他介绍中国的传统节日“中秋节”。要注意写信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点:1.时间;2.方式;3.意义。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: get together聚会,prefer to更加喜欢。还使用了定语从句It is also a custom to express best wishes to people they love at this particular time.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。