Question

【题目】请用“中秋节的等待”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述下图的内容，并就此发表你的评论。

注意：1. 文章必须包括描述和评论两部分；

2. 词数为100左右。

The Mid-Autumn Festival’s waiting

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Answer 1

【答案】As is illustrated in the picture, it’s the Mid-Autumn Festival today, which is a festival for family reunion. An old couple is sitting at the table waiting for their children to come back to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Day with them. They have prepared abundant delicious dishes and desserts for their children. But it’s a quarter past one now. They haven’t come yet. Father prepares to phone them, while mother looks at the door frequently, wishing their children’s coming. The old couple looks disappointed though there is a grand meal in front of them.

What the picture reflects is the loneliness of the old in China. Nowadays, with the pace of life increasing rapidly, the young people are always busy and have less time to spend with their parents. Some of them even don't pay a visit to their parents at some important traditional festivals, such as the Mid-Autumn Day and the Spring Festival. As far as I am concerned, the young should stay with their parents as much as possible however busy they are.It is their duty to take care of their parents and make them feel happy. Only in this way will they show respect to their parents.

【解析】试题分析：

本文属于看图写作类型，根据图片中的信息，以“中秋节的等待”为题写一篇文章。成文时应注意以下几点：(1) 内容完整，描述图片内容并发表自己的观点。(2)人称使用要恰当。以第三人称为主。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：描述图片内容（描述老年夫妇动作的同时，可适当描述他们感到失望的情感）；第二部分：表达想法（无论多忙要多陪伴父母，照顾父母是责任）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：定语从句的使用As is illustrated in the picture, it’s the Mid-Autumn Festival today, which is a festival for family reunion.；现在分词wishing…做伴随状语while mother looks at the door frequently, wishing their children’s coming.；主语从句的使用What the picture reflects is the loneliness of the old in China.；部分倒装的使用Only in this way will they show respect to their parents.。2.使用了重要短语： pay a visit to 拜访；as far as I am concerned就我而言；take care of照顾。