Question

10．请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文．
You cannot change the weather，but you can change your mood．
注意：
①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 本文为半开放性写作．所给句子意思为，你不能改变天气，但是你可以改变自己的心情．讲述了一种乐观的生活态度．需要读者写作关于乐观处事的事例内容，注意是在生活中的事例，列举名人事例是不恰当的．且事例是发生过的，叙述时应当使用过去时．
重要短语：
depends on，取决于，be full of 充满，laugh at　sb．，嘲笑某人
高分句子：
1．Although the songs of birds were very nice and the flowers were very beautiful，they could not let me escape from depression．本句中Although引导条件状语从句，意为尽管．
2．It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese．本句中含有重要句型，It was not long before，不久后．

解答 The weather depends on the sky，but whether you are happy or not depends on yourself．（点明主旨）
　  I can well remember that I didn't pass the Chinese exam several times last year，so the weather of my sky seemed to be full of clouds．（举出事例）Although the songs of birds were very nice and the flowers were very beautiful，they could not let me escape from depression．（高分句型）What's more，I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates．My Chinese teacher noticed my subtle difference，so she gave me some advice and told me to change my attitude．With the help of her，I tried to face the trouble with a positive attitude．To my surprise，everything changed．It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese．（高分句型）
　　Life is full of difficulties．Sometimes you may not be able to decide the situation you are in，but you can change your attitude．（总结文章）

点评 对于开放式作文，考生写作时，可以选取能运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型的点进行展开，对于没有把握的地方，要灵活变通；要尽量运用多样化的句式，注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合；要注意上下文的衔接，过渡要自然．