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11.法国哲学家卢梭说过:"No Thanksgiving would be no virtue."(没有感恩就没有真正的美德.)请你结合自己的实际,谈几点父母值得你感恩的地方,以及将来你会做些什么来报答父母的养育之恩.
注意:1.短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数.
      2.100词左右.(感恩:thanksgiving)
Not only do our parents give us life,but they also give us endless love and support,always sharing our happiness and sorrow.                                             

分析 这是一篇观点类作文,内容贴近考生的生活,具有时代性和可写性.要求考生就感恩这个话题谈谈父母值得感恩的地方,以及具体回报父母养育之恩的做法,考生需要根据自己的生活经历,找出一些切实可行的方法,在写的过程中注意高级词汇和句型的使用,关联词的使用,可以为文章增色不少.
重要短语:
not only…,but also…(不但…,而且…); the whole day(一整天);communicate with(与某人交流);personal space(个人空间);try one's best(尽某人最大努力).
高分句型:
1.They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me.该句灵活运用高级词汇及短语.
2.Luckily my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words.灵活运用luckily,stressful,communicate with等词汇及短语.
3.What I should do now is study hard.该句为主语从句.
4.When I grow up,I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.该句为when…,…will…句型.

解答 Not only do our parents give us life,but also give us endless love,always sharing our happiness and sorrow.(文章主题)
I am very grateful to my parents.They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me.(高分句型1)I still remember once I was seriously ill,they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole day.Now I am in senior3.Luckily my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words.(高分句型2)Furthermore,they give enough personal space,which I appreciate so much.(感恩父母的原因)
What I should do now is study hard(高分句型3).When I grow up,I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.(高分句型4)

点评 开放类作文在写作时要注意内容是否切合所给主题,写作时注意正确运用时态,上下文注意连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需要注意积累短语和重要句型.

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