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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)戈lj掉.

修改：在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.

2．只允许修改l0处, 多者(从第ll处起)不计分.

When an English traveler, who spent a few week in Sweden, was about to return to home, he found he had only enough money left to get a ticket to England. Since it was only two-day voyage, he believed he can get home without eating anything. He final bought a ticket with that little money and went to board the ship. He closed his ears to the sound of the lunch bell or refused to go to the place where people had his dinner when dinnertime came. Therefore, he couldn’t stand this any longer and went to the dining hall, enjoy the last meal on the ship. He then said, “Waiter, brings me the bill.” “Oh, meals are included in the ticket.” said the waiter.

 

1.week → weeks

2.去掉home前to

3.only后加a

4.can → could

5.final → finally

6.or → and

7.dinner前his → their

8.Therefore→ However

9.enjoy → enjoying

10.brings → bring

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了一个英国游客的故事。他在国外度假后只剩下买票回家的钱，于是他决定在两天的旅途中拒绝花钱买饭吃。当到了最后一天的时候，他饥肠辘辘，实在忍受不住，就去餐厅大吃了一顿。当吃完找服务员结账时，才知道原来船上的饭菜都是免费的。

1.week → weeks考查名词。who spent a few week in Sweden。 A few修饰复数名词，故把week改为weeks。

2.home前to 考查介词。was about to return to home。Home是副词，前面不用介词，比如go home。所以去掉to。

3.only后加a 考查冠词。Since it was only two-day voyage。Voyage是可数名词，前面应该有冠词，因为two是以辅音因素开头的词，所以在two-day前面加不定冠词a。

4.can → could 考查动词时态。 he believed he can get home without eating anything.。文章是讲述过去发生的故事，全文都用的是一般过去时，所以把can改为could。

5.final → finally 考查副词。 He final bought a ticket with that little money。此处是修饰动词bought所以应该用副词，把final改为finally。

6.or → and 考查连词。He closed his ears to the sound of the lunch bell or refused to go to the place。根据前后内容可知此处是顺承关系，把or改为and。句意：他懂吃饭的铃声充耳不闻，并且拒绝去那地方。

7.dinner前his → their 考查代词。where people had his dinner when dinnertime came.根据指代一致的原则判断此处指人们吃饭，所以应该用复数代词，把his改为their。

8.Therefore→ However考查副词。Therefore, he couldn’t stand this any longer。从上下文内容可知此处是表示转折关系，把Therefore改为However。

9.enjoy → enjoying 考查非谓语动词。 he couldn’t stand this any longer ，and went to the dining hall, enjoy the last meal on the ship. And连接并列成分时放在最后两个词的中间，由此判断enjoy不是谓语动词。应该是非谓语短语做状语表示伴随，改为enjoying。

10.brings → bring考查动词。“Waiter, brings me the bill.”此处是祈使句，应该用动词原形，把brings改为bring。句意：“服务员，给我把账单拿来”。

考点：考查短文改错

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