题目内容
【题目】假设你是高三学生李华,写信建议你的美国朋友Tom参加21世纪学生英文报(21st Century Teens)专门为外国人举办的2018“最美中国(Amazing China)”手机摄影大赛。信的内容包括:
1.作品内容要求;
2.提交时间和方式;
3.表示愿意提供帮助。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】Dear Tom,
How is it going? I have some exciting news for you! 21st Century Teens will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China”, only open to foreigners. I know you love photography, so why not give it a try?
The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, famous places or historical sites, local customs of China and so forth. And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation of time, place, name of the work, and stories behind. Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Each participant can turn in three photos at most to Photography@ 21st Century Teens. com. Deadline for entries is Dec. 15, 2018.
For more information, you can refer to 21st Century Teens’ official website.
Well, I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do. If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信; 写信建议你的美国朋友Tom参加21世纪学生英文报(21st Century Teens)专门为外国人举办的2018“最美中国(Amazing China)”手机摄影大赛。信的内容包括:1.作品内容要求;2.提交时间和方式;3.表示愿意提供帮助。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组) , 如: hold a mobile photo contest举办手机摄影大赛; be accompanied with 伴随着;turn in 上交; refer to 查阅;等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。该篇文章需要使用第一人称,一般现在时进行写作。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如原因状语从句I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do. 条件状语从句If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。