Question

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Honesty means speaking the truth and being fair. Honesty is a good virtue. If you are honest

all the time, you'll be trusted and respected by others. A liar is always looked down upon and

regarded as a black sheep by the people around. Once you lie, people will never believe you

even if you speak the truth.

However, nowadays it seems that more and more people believe in money at the sacrifice of

honesty. To them, among such things as health, beauty, money, intelligence, honesty, reputation

and talent, honesty is the only thing that can be thrown away. They don't understand or pretend

not to understand that honesty is the biggest fortune for humans,.and that it is necessary to do

everything well.

In short, honesty is gold. Honest, your reputation will become great; dishonest, your name

will be spoiled: Therefore, we should never make such an excuse as "A little dishonesty is only a

slight thing." We should remove immediately the seed of dishonesty once it's sowed in our

minds.

【写作内容】

1．以约30个词概括上面短文；

2.以约120个词谈谈你对诚信的想法，内容包括：

（1)失去诚信的危害性。

（2）举例说明诚信的重要性并谈谈你个人的看法。

【写作要求】

1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历、虚构的故事或生活中的事例，也可以参照阅

读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life, which can contribute to our success and earn us respect from others. Therefore, honesty is of vital importance and bring people benefits.

Dishonesty may bring people short-term benefits. But actually, it will cost them friendship, love, social status or even life. Dishonesty destroys the harmonious relationship between people. What’s worse, it even becomes a barrier of the moral development in society.

San Lu Milk Powder Company made a lot of money by dishonest means. But when the scandal was disclosed ,not only did the company have to close down, but also some officials concerned were sent to prison.

Personally , we should keep in mind that honesty is the best policy. We should try our best to avoid dishonesty. Only in this way can we trust each other and have a harmonious society .

【解析】

本文属于读写任务，考生首先要归纳短文大意，提炼出讨论的中心思想，然后再根据这一中心思想在做详细缩写。本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

【亮点说明】范文中出现一些比较高级的短语plays an important role in扮演重要的角色；contribute to 有助于；What’s worse,更糟糕的是；keep sth in mind 记住；try one’s best to do 竭尽全力做某事；It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life, which can contribute to our success and earn us respect from others.这个句子中体现众所周知这个重要的句型结构，还有which引导的非限制性定语从句。But when the scandal was disclosed ,not only did the company have to close down, but also some officials concerned were sent to prison这个句子中not only but also引导两个句子，第一个句子用倒装的结构。

考点： 提纲类作文