题目内容
【题目】书面表达
请以“A good state of mind is the base of success.”为题,结合你生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文。
要求:1)记述事情的经过,内容必须结合生活中的一个事例。
2)简要说明好的心态对于获得成功的重要性以及从中得到的启示。
3) 文中不得透露个人姓名及班级名称。
A Good State of Mind Is The Base of Success
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【答案】
It is well known that life is complicated. We can’t avoid anything annoying or stressful. Therefore, what is of great importance is that we should keep a good state of mind.
An experience never fades from my memory. With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep, thus making me very sleepy in class. Seeing this, my teacher came to my help. With her aid, I adjusted myself and felt confident again. In the meantime, a detailed plan was made to go over my lessons. In the end, I managed to pass the exam.
It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam. A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal. Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语It is well known that众所周知;is of great importance重要的;In the end最后及keep in mind记在心里等。