题目内容
新年即将来临,你打算用攒下的零花钱给父母买一件礼物。请以 “A present for my parents”为题写一篇文章。该文必须包括以下内容:
1.你送的礼物:一张健康俱乐部的贵宾卡;
2.你父母亲的现状:父亲是教师,工作很辛苦;母亲喜欢读书,但缺乏运动;
3.你送该礼物的原因;
4.该礼物对他们可能产生的影响和带来的变化。
注意:1. 文章应包括以上所有信息;
2. 词数;120左右。文章的开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 健康俱乐部的贵宾卡a VIP card of a health club
缺乏 lack
A Present for My Parents
The new year is coming and I want to give my parents a present.
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A present for my parents
The new year is coming and I want to give my parents a present.
That is a VIP card of a health club. My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time working with great efforts at school. My mother loves reading and often dives into piles of books. But she seldom does exercise.
As I grow up, they are getting older. Both of them should exercise more but neither is doing enough. With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise.
I want to express my love and thanks to them by giving them the present. I think they will relax in the health club and make more friends. At the same time, I hope they will enjoy better health
【解析】本题是说明文写作,主要围绕为父母准备新年礼物,谈谈选择的理由与影响。本题在写作时注意要分为三部分,一是礼物,而是理由,三是影响。本文写作大致也是按照三部分展开。第二段第二句My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time working with great efforts at school使用了非谓语动词做伴随状语;第三段第一句As I grow up, they are getting older.使用了as领导的时间状语从句;第三段最后一句With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise.使用了with的复合结构作伴随状语。本文使用了许多好短语,如:dive into沉浸于,both of两者都,at the same time同时等较为常用经典的短语。本文在词语运用上十分注重简练,如第二段第二句Both of them should exercise more but neither is doing enough前句用both指两人都,后半句用neither指两者都不,一肯一否形成对应,即简练又对称,使文章显得较为有高度。总结:说明文写作时最重要就是把握文章的条理性
考点:考查说明文写作