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新年即将来临,你打算用攒下的零花钱给父母买一件礼物。请以 “A present for my parents”为题写一篇文章。该文必须包括以下内容:

1.你送的礼物:一张健康俱乐部的贵宾卡;

2.你父母亲的现状:父亲是教师,工作很辛苦;母亲喜欢读书,但缺乏运动;

3.你送该礼物的原因;

4.该礼物对他们可能产生的影响和带来的变化。

注意:1. 文章应包括以上所有信息;

2. 词数;120左右。文章的开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3. 健康俱乐部的贵宾卡a VIP card of a health club

缺乏 lack

A Present for My Parents

The new year is coming and I want to give my parents a present.

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A present for my parents

The new year is coming and I want to give my parents a present.

That is a VIP card of a health club. My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time working with great efforts at school. My mother loves reading and often dives into piles of books. But she seldom does exercise.

As I grow up, they are getting older. Both of them should exercise more but neither is doing enough. With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise.

I want to express my love and thanks to them by giving them the present. I think they will relax in the health club and make more friends. At the same time, I hope they will enjoy better health

【解析】本题是说明文写作,主要围绕为父母准备新年礼物,谈谈选择的理由与影响。本题在写作时注意要分为三部分,一是礼物,而是理由,三是影响。本文写作大致也是按照三部分展开。第二段第二句My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time working with great efforts at school使用了非谓语动词做伴随状语;第三段第一句As I grow up, they are getting older.使用了as领导的时间状语从句;第三段最后一句With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise.使用了with的复合结构作伴随状语。本文使用了许多好短语,如:dive into沉浸于,both of两者都,at the same time同时等较为常用经典的短语。本文在词语运用上十分注重简练,如第二段第二句Both of them should exercise more but neither is doing enough前句用both指两人都,后半句用neither指两者都不,一肯一否形成对应,即简练又对称,使文章显得较为有高度。总结:说明文写作时最重要就是把握文章的条理性

考点:考查说明文写作

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A. Drop-Bar Road Bikes

Generally lighter in weight than the typical mountain or comfort bike, road bikes are good for multiple pavement uses including fitness riding, commuting, long-distance/event rides, touring and racing.

Drop-bar handlebars are lightweight and aerodynamic and are a better choice if you want to go faster or are more concerned with efficiently transferring your energy into making the bike move forward. They also allow for a greater number of riding and hand positions than flat-bars. Their more aerodynamic riding position (bent over at the waist) may put more strain on your back if you are less flexible.

B. Flat-Bar Road Bikes

Flat-bar handlebars combine the efficiency of drop-bar road bikes with a slightly more upright riding position. This allows you to sit up in a higher and more relaxed position so you can better see the road and potential risks. An upright position also reduces strain on your hands, wrists and shoulders. This increased versatility comes with the tradeoff of being slightly less efficient (from an aerodynamic standpoint) than the typical drop-bar road bike.

C. Hardtail Mountain Bikes

Mountain Bikes are best for dirt or rocky trails and gravel roads; they are OK for pavement too (with tire change).

Hardtail bikes feature a front suspension fork and a rigid back with no rear suspension shocks. This type of mountain bike is much less expensive and lighter in weight than a typical full-suspension mountain bike. A hardtail is the more versatile choice if you plan to use it for both paved and unpaved surfaces. The tradeoffs from a full-suspension mountain bike? A hardtail is less able to safely handle more technical singletrack trails, provides less overall shock absorption and, in some situations, delivers less rear wheel traction.

D. Full-Suspension Mountain Bikes

Full-suspension mountain bikes have both front and rear suspension shocks making them ideal for backcountry trails or technical (steep, bumpy, twisty) singletrack. They also stand up to more aggressive riding including jumps or drops of up to 5 feet. As mentioned above, full-suspension bikes are more expensive and generally heavier than hardtail bikes.

E. Folding bikes

These bikes can be folded up and placed in a carrying bag, which makes them handy for commuters with limited storage space at home or the office. They are lightweight yet strong and can be folded up quickly and easily. Folding bikes are also a good choice for those who want to travel with their bike.

F. Electric-assist bikes

These bikes feature a battery-powered motor that can help you climb hills easily or make your commute less strenuous. Built-in sensors can monitor how much pressure you're putting on the pedals and then apply battery power accordingly.

以下是一些用户信息,请把图片与相关介绍匹配起来。

1. Tom is a bike lover. He wants to buy a road bike that can go fast on the road. Speed is important but it is more important for him to see the road and stay safe, since the road on which he rides is often full of traffic.

2. Jack is an office worker. Every day he goes to work by subway. There is still a long way from where he lives to the subway station, so he decides to buy a bike, which can be easily put at home, on the subway train and his office.

3. Peter loves making long-distance journey by bike. When travelling, he has to climb hills or ride on rocky trails, which makes him too tired to go. He wants to continue his journey even when he is tired, but he doesn’t want to travel by car or ride his motorbike.

4. Mark is a bike enthusiast who often rides in the mountainous areas. Unfortunately, his bike was damaged when he was riding on the mountain. Now he is going to buy a new mountain bike. Being a rich man, Mark doesn’t care about the price of the bike, but it must be tough and flexible enough to jump and drop on the mountain road.

5. Jim needs a new mountain bike that can be ridden on both paved and unpaved surfaces. It doesn’t need to be too expensive. He hopes to buy a bike that is lighter in weight than a typical full-suspension mountain bike

Having returned from her round trip, the angry woman stood outside the ticket office. "The railway owes me $12, " she said to Harry Jenks, the young man working at the office. "You sold me a ticket for May 22nd, but there was no ship from Jersey that night. So my daughter and I had to stay in a hotel. It cost me $12. “

Harry was worried. He remembered selling the woman a return ticket. "Come into the office, Madam, "he said politely. "I'll check the Jersey timetable for May 22nd."

The woman and her little girl followed him inside. She was quite right, as Harry soon discovered. There was no sailing on May 22nd. How could he have made such a careless mistake? He shouldn't have sold her a ticket for that day. Wondering what to do, he smiled at the child. "You look sunburnt, "he said to her. "Did you have a nice holiday in Jersey?"

"Yes", she answered, shyly. "The beach was lovely. And I can swim too!"

"That's fine, "said Harry. "My little girl can't swim a bit yet. Of course, she's only three”

"I'm four, "the child said proudly. "I'll be four and a half. "

Harry turned to the mother." I remember your ticket, Madam, "he said. "But you didn't get one for your daughter, did you?"

"Er, well", "the woman looked at the child." I mean … she hasn't started school yet. She's only four. "

"A four-year-old child must have a ticket, Madam. A child's return ticket to Jersey costs' "let me see … $ 13. 5. So if the railway pays your hotel, you will owe $1. 5. The law is law, but since the fault (过错) was mine…".

The woman stood up, took the child's hand and left the office.

1.The woman was angry because .

A. she returned home one day later than she thought

B. she spent more money than she had planned

C. there was no ship when she arrived at the station in Jersey

D. the young man didn't sell her the ticket for a round trip

2.Harry felt worried because .

A. he didn't change the timetable in time

B. the woman was too angry with him

C. the woman didn't buy a ticket for her daughter

D. he didn't do his work carefully enough

3.Harry started talking to the little girl because .

A. he had a little girl about the same age as this girl

B. he wanted to find a way out from the little girl

C. he was in difficulty and did not know what to do

D. he wanted to show his friendliness to the little girl

4.The underlined sentence means that .

A. she should pay $1. 5, but as he had made a mistake, she could go without paying

B. the woman had to pay him $1. 5, and the railway would pay for the hotel

C. they have to follow it without other choice, even though the fault was his

D. he must be strict with the woman because of the laws, though he didn't want to

John Milton was born in 1606. His father expected him to enter the church of England, but Milton wanted to be a poet. At twenty-nine Milton set off for a travel on the continent. He traveled in France, Switzerland and Italy, winning the friendship of many artists and scientists, including Galileo, the famous Italian scientist who suffered for his discovery in prison. In 1639, he was planning to go on this journey when the news reached him of the break between the king and Parliament(国会). Milton returned to England immediately, and put himself into the struggle against the king, for which he had long been prepared. During the Civil war, Milton worked as the spokesman of the revolution. By the beginning of 1652, Milton had become completely blind, yet he didn’t stop fighting. After the Restoration(复辟), his books were burnt, and he himself avoided being killed because of his blindness.

John Milton was not only a brave revolutionary but also a great poet. His famous poem Paradise Lost(失乐园) was an immediate success. But, for its publication (being published), Milton received only 18 pounds. He died in 1671.

1.Milton set off for a travel on the continent here “continent” means ________.

A.Asia B.Europe C.America D.Africa

2.What can we learn from the passage?

A.In 1635 Milton made friends with many artists and poets

B.Milton was put in prison for his discovery.

C.Paradise Lost was popular and was a hit at that time.

D.Milton was determined to be a poet because he didn’t like churches.

3.Milton would have been killed if ________________.

A.he had been the spokesman of the revolution

B.his books hadn’t been burnt

C.he hadn’t written the poem Paradise Lost

D.he hadn’t been completely blind

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