Question

【题目】假定你是阳光中学的高二学生，你校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?” 的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提纲准备一份英语发言稿。

1. 学会学习：方法，习惯等 注意：1. 词数120左右

2. 学会做人：真诚，友善等 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 其他方面：考生自拟。 3. 发言稿开头给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone！It’s my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

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【答案】

One possible version：

Good morning, everyone！It’s my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

Firstly, it is advisable for you to learn how to study efficiently. It benefits you a lot to improve your study methods and develop good habits such as previewing lessons, getting actively involved in class and reviewing knowledge learned. Besides, you are supposed to learn how to shape yourselves with sincerity and kindness, which helps you to get along well with your classmates and teachers. What’s more, it is vital for you to persevere in pursuing your dreams despite hardships. It is because of your persistence that you can come to your final success.

I firmly believe that with the suggestions above together with your ceaseless efforts, you are bound to enjoy a meaningful life in senior high school.

【解析】本文是一篇建议性发言稿，主题是“What to learn in senior high school?”。在写作时要注意紧扣写作提纲，因为提示信息较多，所以要充分发挥已经给的写作提纲，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。全文紧紧围绕以下三点：1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；2. 学会做人：真诚，友善等；3. 其他方面来写。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词Firstly ，Besides, What’s more，使文章层次分明，使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次。如从句，固定句型，固定短语等为文章增加获得加分的亮点。因为是高中生写高中生活，所以要用一般现在时。