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6．下面是你同学的一篇英文习作，请你帮助修改这篇作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一次．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Alibaba founder Jack Ma，his company has been valued at more than 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%，is put in the top position among China's wealthiest．But he stays outside the list of the world's 10 rich people．
Fought against a hard life，young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher．Afterwards he started a translation agency in which took him to the US，where he introduced to the Internet．His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang，a co-founder of Yahoo，in a tour of the Great Wall．The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point for all of them，promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry Yang．
分析 本文介绍了阿里巴巴的创始人马云，创建公司发展壮大的过程，并介绍了他与一个人的相遇改变了他们两个人的命运．
解答 Alibaba founder Jack Ma，his company has been valued at more than 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%，is put in the top position among China's wealthiest．But he stays outside the list of the world's 10 richpeople．
Fought against a hard life，young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher．Afterwards he started a translation agencyin which took him to the US，where he∧introduced to the Internet．His fate was bound to changebeforehe was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang，a co-founder of Yahoo，in a tour of the Great Wall．The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point forallof them，promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry Yang．
详解：
1．his改成whose；考查定语从句，定语从句的先行词是Jack Ma，这里是指他的公司，所以用关系代词whose．
2．owned改成owns；考查时态．which Ma owns 6%，是定语从句，本句的叙述是现在时，所以own也要用现在时，又因为Ma是第三人称单数，所以改成owns．
3．rich噶次richest；考查形容词．根据句意"世界最富有的十个人"，rich的最高级是richest．
4．Fought改成Fighting．考查非谓语，young Ma与动词fight之间是主谓关系，所以用现在分词在句中做状语，fought是过去分词．
5．去掉in；考查介词，根据句意"翻译社带他去了美国"，take sb to sp是英语的固定搭配，先行词agency在定语从句中做的是主语，所以用which引导，in是多余的．
6．加was； 考查被动语态．he 与introduce之间是被动关系"被介绍"，所以加was．
7．before改成when/after；考查连词．when是"当…的时候"，after是"在…之后"，根据句意是在他被任命去带领美国的游客Jerry Yang之后或者是那个时候，他的命运就改变了，所以改成when或者after．
8．in改成on；考查介词，on 表示正在进行着的，活动着的，on a tour of the Great Wall是在游览长城．
9．obvious改成obviously；考查副词，本题是副词修饰动词prove，obviously是副词"明显地"．
10．all改成both；考查代词，根据句意这里指的是他和Jerry两个人，both用于两者之间，all用于三者以上．
点评 短文改错考查涉及面广，但却有所侧重．考查点测试频率最高的是动词，涉及动词考查的有时态、语态、非谓语动词形式、情态动词和动词的用法等．此外，还考查名词、介词、代词、冠词、形容词、副词、连词等，还涉及到句型结构、行文逻辑、固定搭配等．
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