Question

【题目】中学生体质状况堪忧，许多学生缺乏运动。为了让同学们重视运动，你校决定出版一期以“运动与健康”为主题的校刊，请以Benefits of taking regular exercise为题，为校刊撰写一篇英语短文。

内容包括：

1.控制体重；2.精力充沛；3.预防疾病；4.增强自信。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Benefits of taking regular exercise

For various reasons, many students fail to take regular exercise. In fact, taking regular exercise benefits us a lot.

To begin with, exercise can help us control weight. When we engage in physical activity, we burn lots of calories. Secondly, regular physical activity can improve our muscle strength and endurance, which can keep us energetic. Thirdly, taking part in physical activity regularly can keep us away from a wide range of health problems to some extent. Finally, taking regular exercise makes us confident because we feel much better about ourselves after working out.

Therefore, to feel better, have more energy and keep fit, we should take exercise on a regular basis.

【解析】

试题分析：本次书面表达的主题是学生们应给予足够重视的：“运动与健康”。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，明确该作文的要点为：1.控制体重；2.精力充沛；3.预防疾病；4.增强自信。2、表达时要重点突出、条理清晰。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本篇范文采用三段式重点突出，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。例如taking regular exercise benefits us a lot.是动名词作主语。, which can keep us energetic.是非限制性定语从句。还有make的复合结构：makes us confident. 此外，文章还使用了大量短语engage in, keep us away from,to some extent, working out等。而To begin with, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally, 以及Therefore, 的使用使文章内容层次感强，也使语言更加连贯。