题目内容
6.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Sir,
I have just read on the newspaper that an English language secretary is wanting in your company.Therefore,I'm writing to introduce me and apply for the position.
I am a 22-years-old female university student,that studies in the English Department of Yunnan University.I do very much well in English listening,speaking,and translation.I can speak and read little French as a second foreign language.Last summer,I also work as a tourist guide and the boss I worked for were very satisfied with my work.
You will know more about me whether I come for an interview.
With best wishes.
Yours
Lihua.
分析 在李华从报纸上得知某公司招聘英语秘书的消息之后,便从自己的身份,学历,英语水平以及工作经历等方面写了这封介绍自己的求职信.
解答 Dear Sir,
I have just read on the newspaper that an English language secretary is wanting in your company.
Therefore,I'm writing to introduce me and apply for the position.
I am a 22-years-old female university student,that studies in the English Department of Yunnan
University.I do very much well in English listening,speaking,and translation.I can speak and read
∧little French as a second foreign language.Last summer,I also work as a tourist guide and the boss
I worked for were very satisfied with my work.
You will know more about me whether I come for an interview.
With best wishes.
Yours
Lihua.
详解:
1.on改为in 考查介词短语 in the newspaper指报纸里的新闻内容; on the newspaper指在报纸(纸张的)上面;此处指的是报纸里的内容,故用in.
2.wanting改为wanted 考查语态 由于主语secretary与谓语动词want构成被动关系,并且根据主句使用了一般现在时可知,此处应使用一般现在时态的被动语态;故用wanted.
3.me改为myself 考查固定词组 introduce oneself 意为:介绍…自己;由于此处的主语是I;故用myself.
4.years改为year 考查形容词 由连字符连接在一起的22-year-old是一个形容词,故不能在其中的year之后加s.
5.that改为who 考查关系代词 本句为非限定性的定语从句,先行词 student指人在该从句中作主语,由于关系代词that不能用于此类定语从句中,故用who.
6.去掉much 考查副词 very much通常用来修饰动词,表示动作的程度;而此处用来修饰副词well,应使用very,故去掉much.
7.little 前加a 考查句意理解以及固定词组 little 含否定的意思,表示几乎没有;a little 是指一些,没有否定的意思;本句的意思是:作为第二外语,我会说以及能读懂一点法语;故在little 前加a.
8.work改为worked 考查时态 根据时间状语"Last summer"可知,此处指的是去年夏天发生的事情,应使用一般过去时,故用worked.
9.were改为was 考查时态以及主谓一致 承接上一句可知,此处指的是去年夏天发生的事情,应使用一般过去时;由于主语 the boss 为第三人称单数形式,故用was.
10.whether改为if 考查句意理解以及从属连词 本句的意思是:如果我来面试,你将会更多地了解我;whether:是否;此处用来引导条件状语从句,意为:如果;故用if.
点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.