Question

12．假设你班最近举行了一次班会，讨论怎样把英语学习变成一件快乐的事．请你根据下表所提示的信息，为某英语周报网站写一篇短文，谈谈你们的讨论情况并提出你的建议．

讨论情况	1．课内互动
	2．课外活动（演讲或晚会等）
	3．运用英语（口头或书面交流）
	…
你的建议	…

注意：
1．对所给要点注意陈述，不要简单翻译．
2．词数110左右．开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：interactive 互动的
Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．                                 

Answer 1

分析 本次作文要求假设你班最近举行了一次班会，讨论怎样把英语学习变成一件快乐的事．请根据下表所提示的信息，为某英语周报网站写一篇短文，谈谈你们的讨论情况并提出你的建议．要点包括：1．课内互动2．课外活动（演讲或晚会等）3．运用英语（口头或书面交流）4．你的建议． 故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求．
写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯．其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力．例如：宾语从句that there are many ways to do so．定语从句whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，状语从句because using English is the best way to learn．In this way，communicate with，reasonable and practical．等词汇及First of all，Secondly，For example等连接词．
Secondly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．（高分句型一）
We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen friends on the Internet．（高分句型二）

解答 Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．Most students believe that there are many ways to do so．First of all，we can have more interactive activities in class，such as discussions，interviews，story-telling and role-play．In this way，we can have more fun learning English．Secondly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．（高分句型一）
       These ideas sound reasonable and practical．From my experience，there are many other interesting and relaxing ways．For example，we can listen to English songs and watch English movies．We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen friends on the Internet．（高分句型二）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．