题目内容
18．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Chaplin made people laugh at a time when they felt depressed，but they could feel more content with to their lives．He was popular with people all over the world for his particular form of humor acting．The little tramp became knowing throughout the world．He played the main character which was poor and homeless，and wear large trousers，worn out shoes and a small round black hat，and carried a walking stick．The character was a social fail，but he won the love of his audience for his determination in overcoming difficulties，and was kind to others．In his film The Gold Rush，Chaplin success made a sad situation entertaining by eating a boiled shoe．As everlasting humor master，Charlie Chaplin will always be remembered by us．
分析 本文主要介绍卓别林的幽默表演给人们带来的快乐．作为一个幽默大师，卓别林将会被我们永远记住．
解答 Chaplin made people laugh at a time when they felt depressed，but they could feel more content with to their lives．He was popular with people all over the world for his particular form of humor acting．The little tramp became knowing throughout the world．He played the main character which was poor and homeless，and wear large trousers，worn out shoes and a small round black hat，and carried a walking stick．The character was a social fail，but he won the love of his audience for his determination in overcoming difficulties，and was kind to others．In his film The Gold Rush，Chaplin success made a sad situation entertaining by eating a boiled shoe．As∧everlasting humor master，Charlie Chaplin will always be remembered by us．
详解：
1．改为so 考查连词．前后两个分句之间表示因果关系而非转折关系，要用连词so．
2．去掉to 考查词语用法．with是介词，后接名词作其宾语，to是多余的，要去掉．
3．humor改为humorous 考查形容词．acting是名词，要用形容词修饰作定语．
4．knowing改为known 考查过去分词．become known意为"出名"，是固定搭配．
5．which改为who 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词character指人，在从句中作主语，用关系代词who．
6．wear改为wore 考查动词时态．was，wore和carried是并列谓语，都用一般过去时态．
7．fail改为failure 考查名词．根据句意：这个角色是个社会失败者．用名词failure，意为"失败的人"．
8．was改为being 考查动名词．介词for后接动词时用动名词形式，be的动名词形式是being．his determination in overcoming difficulties和being kind to others都作介词for的宾语．
9．success改为successfully 考查副词．make是动词，要用副词修饰．
10．加an 考查冠词．master是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
