Question

假设你是黄山中学学生会主席李健。你校将于10月1至2日接待来自瑞士某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排他们在黄山市的2天交流参观活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Amman先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后需征求对方意见。
10月1日：上午参观学校，与学校学生座谈（学校生活、文化差异等）；
中午与我校学生共同进餐（ 自助形式，以中式菜肴为主）；
下午与我校学生进行友谊篮球赛；
10月2日： 游览黄山(中国名山，2002年与瑞士少女峰结为姊妹山)。
注意：1. 词数：100-120；
1.   可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
2.  信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：瑞士 Switzerland； 少女峰Jungfrau； 姊妹山twin-mountain
Dear Mr. Amman,
I am Li Jian, chairman of the Student Union, of Huangshan High School.
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Answer 1

Dear Mr. Amman,
I am Li Jian, chairman of the Student Union, from Huangshan High School. Glad to know that your delegation will visit our school on October 1^st and 2^nd, and I am responsible for arranging your activities here. My plan is as follows:
On the morning of October 1^st, we will show you around the school. Then a discussion will be held, which may cover the topics of school life, cultural differences, and etc, aiming to improve the mutual understanding. At noon, we will have a buffet lunch in the school dining room. To help you know more about our traditional customs and culture, we will be preparing some typical Chinese foods (rice, dumplings and noodles). The afternoon will see a friendly basketball match.
The following day (October 2^nd) will be an excursion day. Your delegation will go to the Yellow Mountain, one of the most famous scenic spots in China, which also enjoys the twin-mountain relationship with Jungfrau--- Top of Europe in Switzerland.
How do you like the proposal? If you have some specific ideas, we will be glad to take them into consideration to make your trip more interesting and impressive!
Looking forward to your early reply!
Best wishes
Sincerely
Li Jian

解析试题分析：这是一封书信，介绍在黄山市的2天交流参观活动，写的时候要注意书信的格式，内容要点给出了一个提纲，分别按日期介绍活动安排，要以时间为顺序清楚的表达，时态以一般将来时为主，要选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。Your delegation will go to the Yellow Mountain, one of the most famous scenic spots in China, which also enjoys the twin-mountain relationship with Jungfrau--- Top of Europe in Switzerland.
这句话比较长，使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，用的很好，还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。
考点：考查书信类作文
点评：除了注意书信的格式，表达方式的选择和要点的完备也很重要，要点不能有遗漏或者省略。也不能按照表格写出提纲式，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，同时要注意因为是邮件要写得亲切直白。