Question

11．最近，很多城市采取措施严惩乱穿马路的行人（Jaywalker）．为此，学校就"中国式过马路（Chinese style road crossing ）的原因"对100名学生进行了采访．请你根据表格中的采访结果为学校网站写一篇短文：

1．简要分析图表
2．发表个人观点
3．提出建议
注意：1．词数：120-150；
2．可适当增加细节，
使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
For example，whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished
高分句型二：
Only in this way can we cross streets safely．
句型一 whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished 该句是一个由whoever引导的主语从句，whoever 在从句中作主语
句型二 Only in this way can we cross streets safely 该句是一个倒装句，only位于句首修饰介词短语时，句子要使用部分倒装，即将主语同谓语部分助动词进行位置的交换．

解答 Chinese style road crossing has been a hot topic on the internet recently．（点题，引出下文）
Now many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights．（现象）Why？I think there are two main reasons．So the following are the result of 100 students investaged．Fifty-nine percent of  stuents think many poeple  lack awareness of traffic safety．（缺乏交通安全意识）21% percent of people go with others．Besides，14% of people are so busy that they can't wait the traffic lights，and  6%of people don't want to wait for the green light．（匆忙赶时间）
  However，it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others．So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents． For example，whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished．（高分句型一） As middle school students，we should obey the traffic rules．（遵守交通规则）What's more，Iwill try my best to advise people to obey the rules．Only in this way can we cross streets safely．（自己的建议）．（高分句型二）

点评 本文是一个图标类书面表达，写作时应注意观察图表所提供的信息，尽量要将其所列内容清楚表达；另外考生平时应注意积累相应的词汇，用准确的、简介的语言将作文表达清楚．