题目内容
【题目】书面表达
学校的各个学生社团(associations)正在纳新。面对众多的选择,你的朋友王林没了主意,写信向你求助。假如你是李越,你认为可以考虑参加篮球协会(the Basketball Association)或者英语俱乐部(the English Club)。
请你用英语给王林写一封120词左右的信,推荐这两个社团,并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Wang Lin.
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Yours sincerely
Li Yue
【答案】
Dear Wang Lin,
In your letter, you have asked me for my advice on how to choose a proper association in your school. Thanks for trusting me and I’ll try to make some suggestions.
I feel that it would be wise if you could join in the Basketball Association since you love it so much. Not only can it satisfy your interest and give you relaxation from heavy school work, it can also promote your friendship with your new companions. Besides, the English Club is also a wonderful choice. Apart from improving your English study, their activities will provide you with a platform to promote your communication skills.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. And I believe it is in various activities that you can showcase your talents and enrich the school life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
【解析】
试题分析:本题是一篇书信写作,要求在信中为朋友提出建议,并给出理由。书信类写作可以按照三段式来写作,第一段要开篇名义,说明写信目的,是请求帮助、提供建议、表达感谢还是歉意。第二段是书信的主体段,一定要根据写作指令中的具体要求,切题发挥,展开写作。最后一段通常是表达感谢/歉意,以及期待回复。文中主要使用一般现在时态,适当加入一般将来时态。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语:征求某人关于...的意见,ask someone for advice on something;提出建议make suggestions或give some advice;参加活动join in ;除了apart from/ besides/in addition/what’s more;为某人提供provide someone with something
常用句型:Not only can it satisfy your interest and give you relaxation from heavy school work, it can also promote your friendship with your new companions. 用Not only....but also连接谓语, not位于句首时注意部分倒装。
I believe it is in various activities that you can showcase your talents and enrich the school life.定语从句的使用增加文章的层次感