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2．随着因特网的发展，网上购物（Online Shopping）已经成为一种时尚．请根据下表内容，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，描述网上购物的利与弊，并发表你个人的观点．
                                 网上购物
网购的优点l  提供方便的服务；
l  购买的商品价格低廉；
l  节省时间．
网购的弊端l  商品质量无保证；
l  退还商品不方便；
l  长时间上网对身体有害．
你的观点（至少两点）1…．；  2…．
注意：开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数．
With the development of technology，online shopping is becoming increasingly popular these days and has become a symbol of fashion．
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分析 随着因特网的发展，网上购物（Online Shopping）已经成为一种时尚．请根据下表内容，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，描述网上购物的利与弊，并发表你个人的观点．这是一篇明显的图表作文，就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以表格的形式列出以进行写作．考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态．题文已经告知要求，那么文体应为应用文体，即介绍网购的优缺点和自己的看法；时态主要用一般现在时即可．考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．然后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇．
【亮点说明】本文语言凝练，论点鲜明，条理层次清晰．文章第二段网购的优点；文章第三段网购的缺点；第四段自己的看法．文章使用了that引导的主语从句that online shopping has many advantages over traditional shopping（网上购物有优于传统购物的许多优点）和定语从句that modern technology brings them（现代科技带给他们的）；only+状语放在句首的倒装句Only in this way can people protect themselves while enjoying the convenience from the Internet（仅仅是这种方法人们才能在享受因特网带来的方便的时候保护他们自己）．高级短语和结构：First of all首先；What's worse更糟糕的是；On one hand一方面；on the other hand在另一方面．最后一句使用Only in this way can people protect themselves while enjoying the convenience from the Internet仅仅是这种方法人们才能在享受因特网带来的方便的时候保护他们自己，即阐明了自己的观点还给文章一个完美的结束．

解答 With the development of technology，online shopping is becoming increasingly popular these days and has become a symbol of fashion．
    It's quite obvious that online shopping has many advantages over traditional shopping．（高分句型一）First of all，people shopping online can enjoy the great convenience that modern technology brings them．In addition，the products online tend to be cheaper than those in traditional stores．What's more，by shopping online，people can save much time，no longer bothering to go to a shopping center．
    However，we can't turn a blind eye to the problems with online shopping．On one hand，the quality of the products，in many cases，seems not as superior as it is promised．On the other hand，it is often inconvenient to change products found unsatisfied．（高分句型二）
    From my point of view，online shopping should only be used when needed．That's to say，you may buy things you can't find in local markets．Besides，people should never rely too much on the Internet．Regular ways of shopping should never be abandoned．Only in this way can people protect themselves while enjoying the convenience from the Internet．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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