题目内容
4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
The Lantern Festival fell on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month.As early as the Western Han Dynasty,it have become a festival with great significance.
This day's important activity is watch lanterns.Lanterns of various shapes and sizes are hang in the street."Guessing lantern riddles"are an essential part of the Festival.People will eat yuanxiao on this day,so it is but also called the"Yuanxiao Festival".Yuanxiao also has other name,tangyuan,that in Chinese has a similar pronunciation with"tuanyuan".But people eat them,looking forward union,harmony and happiness for the family.
分析 本文主要介绍的元宵节的历史及人们如何庆祝元宵节.早在西汉时期它就变成了一个很有意义的节目.这个节目最重要的活动是观灯,有各种形状和大小的灯笼挂在街上,猜灯谜是其中的一部分.除此之外,人们还吃元宵,期待着家庭团园,和谐和幸福.
解答 The Lantern Festival fell on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month.As early as the Western Han Dynasty,it have become a festival with great significance.
This day's important activity is watch lanterns.Lanterns of various shapes and sizes are hang in the street."Guessing lantern riddles"are an essential part of the Festival.People will eat yuanxiao on this day,so it is but also called the"Yuanxiao Festival".Yuanxiao also has other name,tangyuan,that in Chinese has a similar pronunciation with"tuanyuan".But people eat them,looking forward∧union,harmony and happiness for the family.
详解:
1.fell改为falls 考查动词时态.此处讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态,因主语The Lantern Festival是单数形式,谓语动词也应是单数形式falls.
2.have改为had 考查动词时态.根据句中状语As early as the Western Han Dynasty,要用过去完成时态.
3.watch改为watching 考查动名词.分析句子结构,be动词后接表语,用动名词短语作表语watching lanterns.
4.hang改为hung 考查动词语态.Lanterns与hang之间是动宾关系,用一般现在时的被动语态,其过去分词是hung.
5.are改为is 考查主谓一致.动名词短语作主语时,谓语动词要用单数形式is.
6.去掉but 考查副词.此处表示"也"之意,去掉but.
7.other改为another 考查形容词.根据句意:"元宵"也有另一个名字.another意为"(人,事物)又一个的,再一个的".
8.that改为which 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词tangyuan在从句中作主语,用关系代词which,that不可用于非限制性定语从句中.
9.But改为So 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是因果关系而非转折关系,用连词so.
10.加to 考查固定搭配.look forward to意为"期望,盼望".
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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