Question

【题目】书面表达

请按下列提示，用英语写一篇短文。

假如你是某家英文报社的编辑，昨日收到一位中学生读者王丽的来信。请根据来信内容和所给的要点提示用英语写一封回信。词数100左右。

Dear Editor,

I am a hardworking girl and want to be the number one in my class. But in the exams, I always make mistakes that I should have avoided. I really worry about it. What can I do to improve my performance in exams?

Wang Li

提示：

1．不要压力太大；

2．如有问题，请教老师或同学；

3．考试时合理分配时间并尽量抽出几分钟检查。

注意：

1．可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

2．书信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇：分配—distribute

Dear Wang Li,

It's good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Wang Li,

It's good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams. But remember, even the very best can make mistakes sometimes. Therefore, don't put too much pressure on yourself.

Learning from the errors you've made in the past exams is an effective way to avoid making the same mistakes next time. If you have problems you cannot solve, turn to your teacher or classmates for advice.

When you attend the exam, plan how to distribute your time according to the number of questions. Spare a few minutes to review your work in order that you can spot the silly mistakes.

Enjoy the challenge each new exam brings. I believe a good learning habit can eventually help you gain success.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求写回信提建议：1．不要压力太大； 2．如有问题，请教老师或同学；3．考试时合理分配时间并尽量抽出几分钟检查。应该用一般现在时，第二人称；写作时注意增加细节，使衔接合理，还要尽量用高中阶段学习词汇和句型。注意长短搭配。

【亮点说明】本文结构明确，思路清晰。把内容要点都涵盖了。同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如distribute，eventually，还运用了复杂的句子Learning from the errors （you've made in the past exams） is an effective way（ to avoid making the same mistakes next time）. 。并注意了句子的变化和衔接，如用Therefore等。