题目内容
1.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear cousin,
Long time no see!It has been almost a year ever since you move to London.I miss you a lot of.I'm writing the letter to ask you for help.As you know,I am eager to be a photographer like you,so I asked my parents to buy me the camera last week.But he told me I wouldn't concentrate in my schoolwork if I got one.Oh,my God!What can I make them trust me?I'm not a kid any longer,but I can control myself.What's worse,I have promised that I will take photos for the school's newspaper next month.When asking by my classmates,I will be absolutely embarrassed.Therefore,would you like to lend me some money?If you'd like,I will return it as soon as possibly.
Yours Sincerely,
Tom.
分析 本文主要讲述作者想成为一名摄影师,让父母给买台相机,但他们认为会影响他的学习,没有给他买.他只好向其表兄写信求助,希望能借钱给他买相机.
解答 Dear cousin,
Long time no see!It has been almost a year ever since you move to London.I miss you a lot of.I'm writing the letter to ask you for help.As you know,I am eager to be a photographer like you,so I asked my parents to buy me the camera last week.But he told me I wouldn't concentrate in my schoolwork if I got one.Oh,my God!What can I make them trust me?I'm not a kid any longer,but I can control myself.What's worse,I have promised that I will take photos for the school's newspaper next month.When asking by my classmates,I will be absolutely embarrassed.Therefore,would you like to lend me some money?If you'd like∧,I will return it as soon as possibly.
Yours Sincerely,
Tom.
1.move改为moved 考查动词时态.主句为"it is (has been)+一段时间"时,since引导的从句通常为一般过去时
2.去掉of 考查副词.miss是动词,要用副词a lot修饰,意为"非常",a lot of后接名词.
3.the改为a 考查冠词.根据句意:我给你写信请求帮助.letter前用a表示泛指.
4.he改为they 考查代词.they指代my parents.
5.in改为on 考查介词.concentrate on意为"专心于,把思想集中于",是固定搭配.
6.What 改为How 考查副词.根据句意:我如何让他们信任我呢?用副词how.
7.but改为and 考查连词.前后两个单句之间是并列关系,而非转折关系,用连词and.
8.asking改为asked 考查过去分词.I与ask之间是动宾关系,用过去分词作状语.
9.加to 考查词语用法.would like to do sth.想要做某事,相当于省略了to lend me some money,但to不可省略.
10.possibly改为possible 考查固定搭配.as…as possible意为"尽可能",是固定搭配.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.