题目内容
【题目】写作
最近,你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”(My Chinese Dream)为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记,记述班会情况及自己的感受。
内容要点如下:1. 每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解;
2. 你谈到了自己的梦想;
3. 如何实现自己的梦想。
注意:1. 总词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
May 8th Wednesday Sunday
【答案】例文:
May 8th Wednesday Sunny
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President X's Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically/excitedly about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.
I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people's lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.
To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can to be admitted to a good medical college, where I can prepare myself well enough for the job of adoctor. Only in this way can I accomplish/achieve my goal.
【解析】提纲作文要求学生根据所给的写作要求和提纲,确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象,进而用自己的语言老表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言的表达能力。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
