题目内容
13．5月20日是中国学生营养日．某中学生英文报为此开展征文比赛活动，请根据以下要点写一篇征文，谈谈你对中国肥胖儿童现象的看法和建议．内容要点：
1．描述现状：中国肥胖儿童1200多万；
2．说明理由：常吃快餐，缺少锻炼；
3．提出建议…
注意：1．可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；2．词数120左右．
分析 这是一篇对中国肥胖儿童现象的看法和建议的作文．根据题目要求可知用第三人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一描述现状；二说明原因；三提出建议．
高分句型：
（1）One of the primary factors that account for the problem is children's addiction to junk food，which adds too much fat and sugar to whoever takes it．句子里 that account for the problem 是定语从句，修饰先行词是
the primary factors；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句的 junk food．whoever takes it是宾语从句．
造成这个问题的主要原因之一是孩子们喜欢垃圾食品，这些食品会给食用者增加太多的脂肪和糖．
（2）A large number of children would rather sit for hours enjoying themselves in a virtual world than work our regularly．句子里enjoying themselves in a virtual world 是伴随状语，和主语A large number of children 是主动关系．would rather…than 表示"和…相比更愿意做某事"．
很多孩子宁愿一坐几个小时沉溺在虚拟的世界里，也不愿经常锻炼．
解答 Recent yeats have witnessed a growing number of up to 12 million children in China getting more and more overweight．（描述现状）
When it comes to the obesity problem，the reasons are not far to seek．One of the primary factors that account for the problem is children's addiction to junk food，which adds too much fat and sugar to whoever takes it．【高分句型一】Another factor to mention is children's lack of exercise in everyday life．A large number of children would rather sit for hours enjoying themselves in a virtual world than work our regularly．【高分句型二】To make matters worse，the fact that many children stay up late into night also contributes to the problem．（说明原因）
Personally I believe it is ggreat importance to keep a balance diet，which guarantees proper nutrition in ou body．What's more，a healthy life style is the key to a happy life．It is a healthy body and mind that really matters in promising us a brighter future after all．（提出建议）
点评 考查提纲类作文．
写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态．根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
