Question

10．请根据你对下面这幅图的理解，以"What Do Grandparents Expect？"为题，用英语写一篇150词的作文．

你的作文应包括以下内容：
（1）简要描述这喵图的内容；
（2）结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；
（3）举例说明这幅图对你的启示．
WhatDoGrandparentsExpect？
It's a big festival．The grandparents have prepared a big dinner for the family reunion，only to find themselves alone at the table，with the gifts from their children on the chairs．How lonely and disappointed the couple are feeling．
In fact，what old people like them expect from their children and grandchildren is love rather than material stuff．Often the mere sight of their young generations can make them comfortable and satisfied．
The picture reminds me that I，together with my parents，should regularly visit my grandparents living alone on the other end of the town．My hugs will surely make them excited and my doing a bit of housework can more or less relax them．
In a word，however busy we may be，we should spend more time accompanying our parents and grandparents．Considering the sacrifices they've made for us，we should act in return for them．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
The grandparents have prepared a big dinner for the family reunion，only to find themselves alone at the table，with the gifts from their children on the chairs
祖父母们为家庭团聚准备了一顿丰盛的晚餐，结果却发现自己独自一人坐在桌旁，手里拿着孩子们放在椅子上的礼物．
高分句型二：
The picture reminds me that I，together with my parents，should regularly visit my grandparents living alone on the other end of the town．
这张照片使我想起我和我的父母，应该定期去看望住在城市另一端的祖父母．

解答 What Do Grandparents Expect？
It's a big festival．The grandparents have prepared a big dinner for the family reunion，only to find themselves alone at the table，with the gifts from their children on the chairs（高分句型一）．How lonely and disappointed the couple are feeling．
In fact，what old people like them expect from their children and grandchildren is love rather than material stuff．Often the mere sight of their young generations can make them comfortable and satisfied．
The picture reminds me that I，together with my parents，should regularly visit my grandparents living alone on the other end of the town（高分句型二）．My hugs will surely make them excited and my doing a bit of housework can more or less relax them．
In a word，however busy we may be，we should spend more time accompanying our parents and grandparents．Considering the sacrifices they've made for us，we should act in return for them．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．