Question

19．假如你是李华，你家楼下住着一位新搬来的英国人James，他在你家信箱里留了一封信，抱怨你们家维修厨房时候产生的噪音，请给她写一封回信，内容主要包括：
    1．表达歉意
    2．解释原因
•父母白天上班，只能晚上维修，
•不专业，耗时长…
    3．说明措施，请工人周末白天维修注意：
  1．词数100左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；  3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数． 
Dear James，
    We were very shocked to get your letter complaining about the noise from our flat．
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sorry to have caused these problems．
                                                          Yours faithfully，
                                                                                   Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是写一封信，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，本文的主题是回复关于楼下邻居抱怨你们家维修厨房时候产生的噪音的事，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系．灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
【亮点说明】学生写作要有灵活性，同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力．文章使用了很好的短语和句子：accept our apologies接受道歉，are busy at忙于…，have to不得不，What's more还有，have difficulty in做..有困难，As a consequence结果，a lot of大量，call in请来，叫来．we didn't expect it spoiled your evenings and caused you some distress．是并列句，they are not so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly．是结果状语从句，We promise that he'll work only during daytime hours，so you won't be disturbed in the evenings again．是结果状语从句  As a consequence，it is taking longer than expected and has resulted in a lot of banging and hammering．句子出彩，为文章加分．

解答 Dear James，
      We were very shocked to get your letter complaining about the noise from our flat．we didn't expect it spoiled your evenings and caused you some distress．We do hope you accept our apologies．（表达歉意）
       As my parents are busy at work during daytime，they have to refit our kitchen in the evenings．（高分句型一）What's more，they are not so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly．（高分句型二）As a consequence，it is taking longer than expected and has resulted in a lot of banging and hammering．（解释原因）
       As the repair is still not finished，we will call in a professional worker to finish the work this weekend．（高分句型三）We promise that he'll work only during daytime hours，so you won't be disturbed in the evenings again．（说明措施）
        Sorry to have caused these problems．
                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．