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14．假设你是李华，你们学校计划组织学生去长城进行"我爱长城"的宣传活动，请你给你们班的交换生James写一封邮件，邀请他参加．内容包括：
1．集合时间及地点；
2．活动安排：
①捡拾景点乱扔的垃圾；
②宣传文明旅游，爱护文化遗产．
3．注意事项．
注意：1．词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
提示词：涂鸦 graffiti
Dear James，
I'm Li Hua．Our school is planning an activity to call on people to love the Great Wall and protect our cultural relics．I'm writing to invite you to take part in it．Here is the schedule：
We are to meet at the school gate at 7 o'clock this Saturday morning and then go to the Great Wall by bus．On arriving there，we'll pick up the litter and wipe off the ugly graffiti on the Great Wall．（高分句型一）A speech about the importance of protecting cultural relics will also be given．
Since the activity will last to 3 o'clock in the afternoon，you'd better wear comfortable shoes（高分句型二）．Besides，everyone is expected to bring their lunch and share it．
Would you like to join us？Hope to see you then．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，你们学校计划组织学生去长城进行"我爱长城"的宣传活动，请你给你们班的交换生James写一封邮件，邀请他参加，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：集合时间及地点；活动安排：①捡拾景点乱扔的垃圾；②宣传文明旅游，爱护文化遗产． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take part in参加；pick up捡拾；wipe off擦掉；Besides另外；protect cultural relics保护名胜古迹；
On arriving there，we'll pick up the litter and wipe off the ugly graffiti on the Great Wall．（高分句型一）
Since the activity will last to 3 o'clock in the afternoon，you'd better wear comfortable shoes（高分句型二）．

解答 Dear James，
        I'm Li Hua． Our school is planning an activity to call on people to love the Great Wall and protect our cultural relics．I'm writing to invite you to take part in it．Here is the schedule：
        We are to meet at the school gate at 7 o'clock this Saturday morning and then go to the Great Wall by bus．On arriving there，we'll pick up the litter and wipe off the ugly graffiti on the Great Wall．（高分句型一）A speech about the importance of protecting cultural relics will also be given．
        Since the activity will last to 3 o'clock in the afternoon，you'd better wear comfortable shoes（高分句型二）．Besides，everyone is expected to bring their lunch and share it．
        Would  you like to join us？Hope to see  you then．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．