Question

A little boy invited his mother to attend his school’s first teacher-parent meeting. When she said she would go, he was disappointed as he had always been ashamed of his mother’s scar that covered nearly the entire right side of her face. The boy never wanted to talk about why or how she got the scar.

At the meeting, the people were impressed by the kindness and natural beauty of his mother in spite of the scar, but the little boy was still embarrassed and hid himself from everyone. He did, however, overhear a conversation between his mother and his teacher.

The teacher asked carefully, “How did you get the scar on your face?” The mother replied, “When my son was a baby, he was in a room that caught fire. Everyone was too afraid to go in because the fire was out of control, but I went in. As I was running toward his bed, I saw a long piece of wood coming down and I placed myself over him trying to protect him. I was knocked senseless but fortunately, a fireman came in and saved both of us.” She touched the burned side of her face. “This scar will be lasting, but to this day, I have never regretted what I did.” At this point, the little boy came out running toward his mother with tears of regret in his eyes.

【写作内容】

1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容

2. 以约120个词讲述一个关于你(或你的朋友)的父母对子女无私的爱的故事。内容包括：

（1）讲述一个体现父母无私的爱的故事；

（2）父母无私的爱对你（或你的朋友）带来的影响；

（3）你认为作为儿女要如何回报父母的爱。

 

 

 

【写作要求】

1. 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

 

Answer 1

one possible version:

A boy was ashamed of his mother’s scar on the face. Knowing by accident it was caused when she tried to rescue him from a terrible fire at the risk of her life, he was touched and regretful.

Children are said to be a gift from God for parents. Therefore, most parents are grateful for this great gift and never hesitate to sacrifice for their children. My friend, Tom, is disabled from birth, who can only move in a wheelchair. His parents devote all their love to him though most of their friends and relatives try to persuade them to give birth to one more child, which may at least ensure their happy life in their late years. Considerable difficulties are involved in looking after a disabled one, but Tom’s parents make every effort to ensure he can live as happy a life as any normal child. Their devotion and selfless love make Tom an active, confident boy and a top student in school, the most promising one to be admitted to Beijing University.

Tom’s story is but one of the moving stories between parents and children. No one can deny that parents are the ones who love us most and deserve our deepest love. As children, we should always be thankful to their love and be ready to love them in return.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，内容包括：1. 写故事梗概；2. 讲述一个关于父母对子女无私的爱的故事。内容包括：（1）讲述一个体现父母无私的爱的故事；（2）父母无私的爱对你（或你的朋友）带来的影响；（3）你认为作为儿女要如何回报父母的爱。短文应该用一般过去时讲述故事梗概，第三人称。多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】本文概括准确如开始时对妈妈脸上的伤疤感到ashamed，了解情况后很受感动touched and 也很后悔自己的行为regretful。讲述故事体现了父母对一个残疾孩子无私的爱。他们devote all their love to him，为了全心全意照顾他，不考虑再要一个孩子防老。be involved in looking after a disabled one, make every effort to ensure he can live as happy a life as any normal child. 都很不错。句子之间的连贯表现在运用了不同的连词，如but, Therefore。句中还有which \who引导的非限制性定语从句等提高了文章的表达水平。

考点：提纲作文。