题目内容
4.假如你是李华,你的笔友Peter给你发来一封电子邮件,信中提到他不久前去法国留学,很不适应那里的生活.请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封建议信.1.尊重当地的风俗习惯;
2.与法国学生多交流;
3.积极参加各项活动;
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数;
4.请勿出现真实姓名与学校名.
Dear Peter,
How nice to hear from you again!-----
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假如你是李华,你的笔友Peter给你发来一封电子邮件,信中提到他不久前去法国留学,很不适应那里的生活.请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封建议信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:尊重当地的风俗习惯;与法国学生多交流;积极参加各项活动; 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:get used to习惯于;First of all首先;besides另外;finally最后,终于;have fun过的愉快;adapt to适应
First of all,you should respect the local customs there and try to involve yourself in the natives'lives.(高分句型一)
Finally,it is suggested that you participate in more activities,which may help you relax and have fun.(高分句型二)
解答 Dear Peter,
How nice to hear from you again!I think it is natural for you not to get used to the life there.Here I have some suggestions for you.
First of all,you should respect the local customs there and try to involve yourself in the natives'lives.(高分句型一)Just as the saying goes,"When in Rome,do as the Romans do."Besides,don't be afraid to communicate with French students and make friends with them.Friendship will bring you happiness.Finally,it is suggested that you participate in more activities,which may help you relax and have fun.(高分句型二)
I do hope my suggestions will help.May you adapt to your new life and enjoy your stay there.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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