题目内容
16．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华．今天是你父亲的生日，你给父亲买宪生日蛋糕后，在回家途中做了几件好事．请根据图片的先后顺序，写…篇英文日记，介绍事情的全过程．注意：1．日记的开头已为你写好．
2．词数不少于60．
March 23，Friday Sunny
Today is Dad's birthday and I wanted to buy him a gift，．
分析 高分句型：
句型一：
I got off the bus and was about to①cross the road when ②I saw a blind man waiting ③by the crosswalk．
我下了车，正要过马路时，我看见一个盲人正等着通过人行横道．
①be about to 意为：马上做某事；
②when前面的分句使用was about to，表示正要做…，这时，突然；
③see sb．doing sth．意为：看到某人正在做某事．
句型二：
Hearing my story ①，Dad smiled，"It is not the cake but your deed of helping others that②is the most valuable gift for me．"听到我的故事后，爸爸笑了："不是蛋糕而是你帮助别人的行为才是我最珍贵的礼物．"
①此处为现在分词短语在句中作时间状语，动词hear与其逻辑主语Dad构成的是主谓关系．
②"It is not…that"为强调句的句式结构，此处强调的是句中的主语not the cake but your deed of helping others．
解答 March 23，Friday Sunny
Today is Dad's birthday and I wanted to buy him a gift．So after school I hurried to a bakery and bought a big birthday cake．Imagining the delighted look on his face when Dad saw the cake，I couldn't wait to go back home．（对第一幅图的描述：为父亲买生日蛋糕）
When I got on a bus，I was pleased to find a vacant seat，so I sat down with the cake on my legs．When the bus got to the next stop，an old lady got on，carrying many bags．Without hesitation，I gave my seat to her and I was standing until arriving at the destination．（对第二幅图的描述：让座）I got off the bus and was about to cross the road when I saw a blind man waiting by the crosswalk．【高分句型一】I walked over quickly and led him across the road safely．（对第三幅图的描述：扶盲人过马路）
Arriving home，I gave the cake to Dad as well as my best wishes．And then，I told Mum and Dad what I had done on my way home．Hearing my story，Dad smiled，"It is not the cake but your deed of helping others that is the most valuable gift for me．"【高分句型二】（对第四幅图的描述：为父亲过生日并得到了父亲的称赞）
点评 本题提供的是图画，主要考查考生的观察力、思考力以及表达能力；因此要求考生应结合题目的要求，看懂了意思之后再进行写作；具体做法是：首先，根据图画内容整理出几个要点，再根据这些要点决定要采用的语言形式，包括确定文中的人称，时态以及选用相应的句式结构，有时还要写出自己的看法或感受．
Lazy people will never amount to anything in life．However，laziness can be defeated once a few changes have been made in your mind．
（36）C．Many people lack sleep constantly，since they stay up too late and get up too early to prepare for work．These people have little motivation once they arrive home．Laziness works hand in hand with a lack of motivation and a tendency to put off things．By adjusting your sleep schedule to provide a few more hours of meaningful rest，you can fight laziness throughout the day．
Another way to fight laziness is to change your mind from passive to active．（37）E．Others take a more proactive（积极主动的） approach，viewing each task as a challenge they must overcome alone．Laziness sets in when you no longer feel in charge of your own life．
Some people fight laziness by removing the temptations（诱惑） that surround them．A television in the living room may provide entertainment，but watching too much TV often contributes to laziness．Create a reward system for yourself，just as parents do for a child to promote responsibility．（38）A．
（39）B．Spouses（配偶）and children may all have different energy levels，but laziness can be spread if not dealt with immediately．To fight household laziness，set an example，be the first to collect and wash dishes after a meal．Others in the home may eventually follow your example and perform their own task．It is difficult to practice laziness when you are surrounded by motivated people．
Finally，taking exercise regularly can help you fight laziness．（40）G，thus enabling you to have more energy and help lift your spirits．
| A．Complete a few tasks and reward yourself with what you enjoy，such as a good dinner or a film B．Laziness can also be a lasting problem at home C．One way to fight laziness is to get enough sleep D．Knowing how to fight laziness is important E．Some people treat their lives as if they were pushed from task to task F．With strong determination，you will be able to achieve your goal G．Enough exercise and a balanced diet can help you to develop a healthy lifestyle |
As every coin has two sides，studying abroad is not an exception （例外）．There are advantages for people to attend schools abroad．In the first place，he can use the foreign language in his daily life so that his ability in the second language may be greatly improved，as it is obvious that there is no better chance to improve the second language than living in the country where it is spoken．While studying in a foreign country，he will most likely meet many others from overseas and it is possible to make friends from all over the world．This is not only exciting on the social level，but could lead to important overseas contacts in his career as well．He can get familiar with the latest knowledge in science and make use of the firstrate facilities available．In this way，there is every chance that he is able to widen his horizon and broaden his mind．
Of course，attending schools abroad may bring about a series of problems．The most serious problem is language barrier．Most of the students who go abroad don't have enough skills in the language spoken there．As a result，on arriving there，they will find it difficult to understand what the teachers say．Besides，for lack of knowledge of the customs of the local people，they may constantly run into trouble in dealing with various situations．
In conclusion，given an opportunity to attend a school abroad，one must consider both sides of the factors carefully before making up his mind．
| Title：Studying Abroad | |
| Phenomenon | Sending children abroad to receive education is（72）popular with many rich parents． |
| （71）Advantages | ☆Greatly improve the （73）second language． ☆Possibly make many friends from（74）abroad/overseas． ☆Widen horizon and（75）mind． |
| Disadvantages | ☆Language barrier §Don't have（76）skillsin the language spoken there． §Have difficulty in（77）understandingwhat the teachers say． ☆（78）Lackknowledge of the customs of the locals |
（80）Conclusion | （79）Sidesof the factors should be taken into consideration carefully before one makes a decision． |