Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华。你的美国朋友Carl正在你市度假，请你代表学生会给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他给同学们做报告。邮件内容如下：

1.时间：下周三下午3点到5点；

2.报告内容：如何提高英语口语，美国中学生的业余生活以及中美文化差异。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Carl,

I’m glad to hear that you’re enjoying your holiday in my city.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Carl,

I’m glad to hear that you’re enjoying your holiday in my city. On behalf of the Student Union in my school, I’d like to invite you to give us a talk from 3 p. m. to 5 p. m. next Wednesday.

Please give us some advice on how to learn English, especially oral English in a more effective way. As you know, most of us are not good at spoken English. We’re also very interested in what American students do in their daily lives. In addition, you can talk about some cultural differences between China and America from your own experiences, which are of vital importance to us.

Is the time convenient for you? If not, can you suggest another time? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇英文电子邀请邮件。在形式上具有简短、热情的特点，通常适用于熟人之间一些平常的事情的邀请。一般采用三段式：

第一段开门见山地点出邀请对方的意图及时间地点等。在本段中用宾语从句：I’m glad to hear that you’re enjoying your holiday in my city.。

第二段具体交代具体的内容。在本段中使用了多种句式。如(1)疑问词+动词不定式的句式：Please give us some advice on how to learn English, especially oral English in a more effective way.。(2)由as引导的非限制性定语从句：As you know, most of us are not good at spoken English. (3)由what引导的名词从句：We’re also very interested in what American students do in their daily lives.及(4)由which引导的非限制性定语从句： you can talk about some cultural differences between China and America from your own experiences, which are of vital importance to us.。

最后一段表达期待朋友的回复。在本段中使用了省略句：If not, can you suggest another time?让文章的结尾非常完美。

在文中使用的连接词如：In addition,高级词汇如 cultural differences between … and … from your own experiences，be of vital important to，look forward to hearing from

总之，文章章结构严谨，层次分明，运用了多种复合句，如宾语从句，定语从句，省略句，句式多变，同时还使用非谓语，连词的运用恰当，高级词汇给文章增色不少。