Question

11．主办奥林匹克运动会曾经是中国人的梦想．为了实现这个伟大的梦想，70多岁的何振梁不辞辛苦地走访了许多国家，寻求支持．2004年，他和他的团队经受失败，但2008年他们获得成功．
写作要求：
1、简述所提供的材料；
2、你从他身上学到什么？你的梦想是什么？
3、联系自己的实际，谈谈你为了实现自己的梦想而做哪些准备
写作提示：
1、词数120词左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文为人物介绍及从人物身上学习到的东西以及联系自身实际，谈谈自己该为梦想做哪些准备．
写作要点为：1、简述所提供的材料；
2、你从他身上学到什么？你的梦想是什么？
3、联系自己的实际，谈谈你为了实现自己的梦想而做哪些准备．

解答 As is known to us all，to host the Olympic Games is a Chinese's dream．In order to realize the great dream，He ZhenLiang who was seventy years old at that time，took all the trouble to visit many countries to seek for support．In 2004 he and his team suffered failure but in 2008 they won success．
Undoubtedly，from him I can learn that we should fight for our dream bravely．My dream is to be a soldier．I have been longing for the green uniform and handsome appearance so much．Therefore I take more exercise to make me stronger and stronger．Moreover I spare no efforts to get more and more knowledge，which makes it possible for me to be a good soldier．Even if I meet with any difficulty or failure，I will never give up my dream．Instead，I will face it confidently．
Dear friend，He Zhen Liang has set a good example for us to work hard for our dream．I do believe only if we put our heart into our dream can we achieve it one day

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