Question

【题目】书面表达

据报道，在我国仍有很多山区的孩子因为家庭贫穷而上不起学。你们班就如何帮助这些孩子上学进行了讨论。假如你是李华，请你把你们的建议写成一封信寄给Teens，希望他们能够呼吁更多的人参与这项活动。

内容要点：

1. 收集旧课本和衣服；

2. 呼吁更多人帮助他们；

3. 你的建议, 至少一条。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high school student. _________________________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high school student. It’s reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can’t go to school because of poverty. Last week, our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood.

Here are our suggestions. First, some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused by them. Second, it’s also very important to appeal to more people and social organizations to help and care for those poor children. As far as I’m concerned, we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those children in need. Above all, we should give them respect, never looking down upon them because they are poor.

We’ll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly, increase public awareness of the poor children’s living conditions and call on more people to help them.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇建议信的作文。文章给出了一篇短文和作文要求，这给考生提供了比较明确的背景和可参考的依据。考生需要发挥想象、展开思维，把文章内容写的具体、鲜活并且要有说服力。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：灵活变换；3.文章的内容要点要齐全；4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数要够，100单词左右。7.注意书写。