Question

【题目】阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

There once was a little boy who had a bad temper. His father gave him a bag of nails and told him that every time he lost his temper, he must hammer a nail into the back of the fence.

The first day the boy had driven 37 nails into the fence. Over the next few weeks, as he learned to control his anger, the number of nails hammered daily gradually decreased. He discovered it was easier to hold his temper than to drive those nails into the fence.

Finally the day came when the boy didn’t lose his temper at all. He told his father about it and the father suggested that the boy now pull out one nail for each day that he was able to hold his temper. The days passed and the young boy was finally able to tell his father that all the nails were gone.

The father took his son by the hand and led him to the fence. He said, “You have done well, my son, but look at the holes in the fence. The fence will never be the same. When you say things in anger, they leave scars just like these. And no matter how many times you say you're sorry, the wounds will still be there.”

写作内容：

1. 以“Anger management”为题约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 谈谈你的想法（120词），内容包括：

（1）你自己的一次亲身经历；

（2）分析愤怒情绪可能产生的后果（一到两点）；

（2）就如何控制愤怒情绪提出建议（一到两点）。

Answer 1

【答案】

A father got his son to hammer a nail whenever he lost his temper. Eventually, the boy learned to control his anger and understood that anger could do harm to others. (31 words)

The story reminds me of one of my own experiences. I once quarreled with my best friend. I was so angry that I said many cruel words. I apologized later but we are no longer best friends.

Poor anger managemen has many disadvantages. Those who can’t control their anger are unlikely to get along well with others. What’s worse, they can experience problems like anxiety, depression and even violence, which of course has a bad effect on the quality of their life.

As high school students, we should learn to control our anger. Firstly, remember to calm down when in trouble because anger can’t help solve the problem. Secondly, when others do wrong to us, we should learn to forgive and forget. (155 words)

【解析】

试题分析：阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。写作内容：1. 以“Anger management”为题约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 谈谈你的想法（120词），内容包括：（1）你自己的一次亲身经历；

（2）分析愤怒情绪可能产生的后果（一到两点）；（3）就如何控制愤怒情绪提出建议（一到两点）。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】A father got his son to hammer a nail whenever he lost his temper.句中使用时间状语从句；I was so angry that I said many cruel words.结果状语从句在句中体现；I apologized later but we are no longer best friends.巧妙运用并列句；Those who can’t control their anger are unlikely to get along well with others.定语从句使用得当；What’s worse, they can experience problems like anxiety, depression and even violence, which of course has a bad effect on the quality of their life. 使用非限制性定语从句；Firstly, remember to calm down when in trouble because anger can’t help solve the problem.省略句和原因状语从句完美结合；Secondly, when others do wrong to us, we should learn to forgive and forget.这句话很有哲理性；另外，Eventually, do harm to，reminds me of，What’s worse, Firstly, Secondly,为文章增色添彩。