Question

【题目】 假如你是星光中学的学生李华，将参加主题为“My Chinese Dream”的英语演讲比赛，请撰写一篇演讲稿，主要内容包括：

1． 梦想成为一名山村教师，帮助山村孩子;

2． 山区偏僻，教育落后;

3． 父母和朋友都反对;

4． 我会......

注意： 1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。

Good morning, everyone!

Thank You!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone!

I’m Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “My

Chinese Dream”.

As we know, the education of rural areas is falling behind other areas. And the children there are longing for knowledge. Therefore, the problem about the lack of teachers is especially serious. It puzzles me that parents and friends aren’t in favour of my idea of being a rural teacher. And they think I am foolish. I understand their thoughts and feelings, but I think the children in rural areas are in great need of me. I will study hard to go college, thus realizing my dream.

I won’t regret my choice. I will struggle for my dream. Come on and join me!

Thank You!

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是星光中学的学生李华，将参加主题为“My Chinese Dream”的英语演讲比赛，请撰写一篇演讲稿，主要内容包括：1.梦想成为一名山村教师，帮助山村孩子；2.山区偏僻，教育落后；父母和朋友都反对；我会......。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.写作时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。避免全部使用简单句。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。

【亮点说明】As we know, the education of rural areas is falling behind other areas.as引导的非限制性定语从句在句中体现；It puzzles me that parents and friends aren’t in favour of my idea of being a rural teacher.句中运用了主语从句，其中it是形式主语；And they think I am foolish.句子虽短，但包含了一个宾语从句；I understand their thoughts and feelings, but I think the children in rural areas are in great need of me.表示转折的并列句，并且but后运用了含宾语从句的复合句；I will study hard to go college, thus realizing my dream.现在分词作自然的结果状语，运用巧妙；Come on and join me!最后使用了祈使句，使文章更显魅力。