Question

5．假定你是中学生李华，最近从莆田新闻网上得知第25届世界技能锦标赛（the 25^th World Skills Championship）将在莆田举行．请你用英文写封电子邮件向组委会申请加入志愿者队伍，内容主要包括：
1．身体状况（年龄、身高…）；
2．兴趣爱好（摄影、踢足球…）；
3．英文程度；
4．目的和意义．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．结语已为你写好．
Dear Sir，
My name is Li Hua，aged 17，of medium size．I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer for the 25th World Skills Championship，which will be held in Putian in March．（高分句型一）My advantages for the role are as follows．
First，I'm good at spoken English，so that I can communicate with foreigners fluently．Second，I'm interested in taking photos，which will serve people well during this period．（高分句型二）Third，playing football not only builds me up，but also develops my team spirit．Last but not least，I'm sure this activity will benefit me a lot．I'd be very grateful if you let me have information about my becoming a member of the volunteers．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息最近从莆田新闻网上得知第25届世界技能锦标赛（the 25^th World Skills Championship）将在莆田举行．请你用英文写封电子邮件向组委会申请加入志愿者队伍，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：身体状况（年龄、身高…）；兴趣爱好（摄影、踢足球…）；英文程度；目的和意义． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：apply for申请； First首先；Second其次；Third第三；Last but not least最后同样最重要的是；communicate with与…交流；not only，but also不仅，而且；be good at擅长；hear from收到…的来信；
I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer for the 25th World Skills Championship，which will be held in Putian in March．（高分句型一）
Second，I'm interested in taking photos，which will serve people well during this period．（高分句型二）
I'd be very grateful if you let me have information about my becoming a member of the volunteers．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir，
      My name is Li Hua，aged 17，of medium size．I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer for the 25th World Skills Championship，which will be held in Putian in March．（高分句型一）My advantages for the role are as follows．
      First，I'm good at spoken English，so that I can communicate with foreigners fluently．Second，I'm interested in taking photos，which will serve people well during this period．（高分句型二）Third，playing football not only builds me up，but also develops my team spirit．Last but not least，I'm sure this activity will benefit me a lot．I'd be very grateful if you let me have information about my becoming a member of the volunteers．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to hearing from you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．