Question

假如你是李华，对今年一月出现的严重雾霾记忆犹新，认为绿色生活方式对于改善空气质量十分有益。请根据下列要点写一篇短文，向校刊“英语角”栏目投稿。

简述雾霾情况	倡导绿色生活
持续三周左右 影响全国多地 造成极大不便	乘坐公交出行 节约水电纸张 … …

 

注意：1．词数：120左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。　

Greener Life Cleaner Air

It is not easy to forget the heavy smog that occurred on January.___________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Greener Life, Cleaner Air

It is not easy to forget the heavy smog that occurred last January. It lasted for about three weeks and affected many areas in China, causing much inconvenience and even harm to our life and health.

The incident warned us to take actions to fight for clean air before it’s too late! And I believe a green lifestyle can make a big difference to the air quality! Firstly, it’s good to take buses or other means of public transportation rather than cars whenever possible. What’s more, be aware to save water, electricity and paper. Moreover, recycle whatever we can. Last but not the least, don’t forget to influence those around you to follow!

【解析】

试题分析：考查表格类作文的写作。根据表格要点简述雾霾情况，并倡导绿色生活，具体信息是以表格的形式给出，考点只需要适当串联即可，在写作的时候一定要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体，同时要注意使用英语句型，也要使用倒装句，定语从句等特殊的句式来提高文章的多样性。象范文的句子：it’s good to take buses or other means of public transportation rather than cars whenever possible.就使用了it做形式主语，还有状语从句的省略，还要用适当的关联词把句与句连起来，如：firstly;what’s more；last but not least等等。

考点：考查表格类作文的写作

点评：本文属于表格类作文，此类作文虽然好写，但是要写出特色是很不容易的。关键是要点要全面覆盖，不能有遗漏和省略。写作的时候运用多种表达方式，让句子有变化。