Question

假如你是李华，你的好友刘捷今年以较好的成绩考取了上海外国语大学，请你给她写封信，以分享她成功的快乐。内容应包括以下三个方面的内容：1.对她的成绩表示祝贺；2.肯定她付出的努力；3.决心向她学习，明年取得好的成绩。
注意：1.词数：120-150；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：上海外国语大学：Shanghai International Studies University

Answer 1

Dear Liu Jie,
Haven’t seen you for months! I am extremely happy to know that you have been admitted to Shanghai International Studies University!Congratulations!
There is no doubt that you have devoted a lot to your studies, for which I admire you much! I still remember you told me that if one wants to achieve success, her must have a plan first, and then, stick to it. I will do as you told me.
Now, it is my turn to realize my goal in the coming college entrance examination. I will try my best to work hard and I believe I can also get excellent results like you. Please wait for my good news. I won’t disappoint you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。