题目内容
假如你是美国留学生李华,因要回国数日,请给你的室友Mike写一封留言条。可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。 柜子:locker
内容提要:
1、因参加好友婚礼,并顺便看望祖父母,故回国;
2、约两周内返回。在此期间,请帮我看我的猫,早晚各喂一次,它的东西放在柜子里。
June 1st, 2009
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry for not saying goodbye to you. I have to leave for China in a hurry to attend my best friend’s wedding ceremony. At the same time, I am planning to visit my grandparents because I miss them very much. I will be back in two weeks. Would you please look after my cat while I am away?
I feed my cat twice a day: In the morning and in the evening. Everything needed: Milk, toys and so on. They are in my locker. Note down anything you buy for my cat, and I will pay you back as soon as I return. Thank you very much.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:分析要求可知,假如你是美国留学生李华,因要回国数日,请给你的室友Mike根据提示,用英语写一则留言条。1、因参加好友婚礼,并顺便看望祖父母,故回国;2、约两周内返回。在此期间,请帮我看我的猫,早晚各喂一次,它的东西放在柜子里。短文应该用一般现在时,第一人称。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式,注意英语的习惯表达,句子之间的连贯性,增强写作的规范性。
【亮点说明】范文较好地体现了题目的写作要求,逻辑层次清晰,内容充实,语言自然地道。定语从句Note down anything you buy for my cat以及At the same time,连接词的使用都比较自然、贴切。
考点:留言条类作文。