Question

4．假定你是李华，你与留学生Tom约好周六上午一起去爬山，但你因临时接到面试通知不能赴约．请你给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括；
1．表达歉意；
2．说明原因；
3．另约时间．
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
I'm sorry to tell you that I cannot go climbing with you On Saturday morning，I have just been informed that I have to go to an interview．I hope that the adjustment won't put you to so much trouble．
What about climbing the mountain on Sunday morning？If it suits you，let's meet at 7：30 outside the school gate．If not，let me know the time that is convenient for you．I should be available every week end．
I sincerely hope that you'll accept my apologies．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封因为不能赴约的道歉信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表达歉意并且说明原因；二另约时间；三再次道歉．
高分句型：
1．I have just been informed that I have to go to an interview．句子里inform表示"告知"；that引导宾语从句 I have to go to an interview；have to 表示"不得不"．
我刚刚被通知我必须去面试．
2．If not，let me know the time that is convenient for you．句子里If not是省略句，表示"如果不适合"；that is convenient for you是定语从句，先行词是the time；convenient表示"方便的"．
如果不适合．请你告知我对你来说便利的时间．

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm sorry to tell you that I cannot go climbing with you On Saturday morning．I have just been informed that I have to go to an interview．【高分句型一】I hope that the adjustment won't put you to so much trouble．（表达歉意并且说明原因）
       What about climbing the mountain on Sunday morning？If it suits you，let's meet at 7：30 outside the school gate．If not，let me know the time that is convenient for you．【高分句型二】I should be available every week end．
（另约时间）          
           I sincerely hope that you'll accept my apologies．（再次道歉）                                                        
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

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