Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was in my way home from college when I got a phone call, telling me that my best friend sudden passed away. On heard the news, I sat on the ground and cried. People stepped over us. Then I saw a pair of shoe in front of me. It was a young man, whom was probably in his twenties. He asked me what had happened and brought me to cafe, treating me for a cup of coffee. I calmed down a little when he gently suggested I washed my face. When I came back from the bathroom, he was disappeared. The woman behind the counter said he had paid a full dinner for me and left money in case I needed a taxi home.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in - on

【2】sudden – suddenly

【3】heard – hearing

【4】us - me

【5】shoe - shoes

【6】whom - who

【7】cafe - a café

【8】for - to

【9】washed - wash

【10】was去掉

【解析】

试题分析：这是作者讲述自己在听到朋友突然去世的噩耗时得到别人帮助，心中感恩不尽。

【1】in - on 考查介词。根据短语on one’s way home在某人回家的路上，故in - on 。

【2】sudden – suddenly 考查副词。根据句中suddenly突然地，副词修饰动词pass away过世。故sudden – suddenly。

【3】heard – hearing 考查非谓语动词。根据介词on之后应用动词的ing形式，故heard – hearing。

【4】us - me 考查代词。根据前文我坐在地上哭，人们从我的身上踩过，故us - me。

【5】shoe - shoes 考查名词。根据词组a pair of shoes一双鞋，应用复数形式，故shoe - shoes。

【6】whom - who 考查定语从句。根据此句是定语从句，先行词a young man，引导词who在定语从句中做主语。故whom - who。

【7】cafe - a café考查冠词。根据单词café是可数名词，又是单数形式，应用不定冠词，故应cafe - a café。

【8】for - to 考查介词。根据treat sb to sth :招待某人，请某人吃饭。故for - to。

【9】washed - wash 考查虚拟语气。根据suggest建议的宾语从句应用should+动词原形，should可省略，故washed - wash。

【10】was去掉 考查连词。根据disappear消失，为不及物动词，无被动语态。故was去掉。